Escalation

[mamas_minion]

Chepi bolted down the hall towards the elevator.  The monster was not far behind her.  She hadn’t got a very good look to size it up when she came through the hatch, right before it lunged at her, all snarls and teeth, so she wasn’t sure what kind of beast it was, but right now, she really didn’t care.  This job was supposed to be a simple snatch

Comments

[kagomeshuko]

*hides from the monster*

[mamas_minion]

You don't have to hide (: Thank you for reading my post.

[adoptedwriter]

Lots of nice action and great dialogue that moves the story. AW

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, Glad you enjoyed the story

[halfshellvenus]

I like the chorus of spirits here, for some reason, and their disjointed clamoring. I feel for the little one. :)

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, I was hoping the spirits would breakup things a little a bit.

[jexia]

I enjoyed this, thanks.

[mamas_minion]

Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed it.

[cheshire23]

I like the variety of characters you have here!

[mamas_minion]

thanks I like to mix up creautres whenever possible.