Rest Stop

[mamas_minion]

It had been a rough day for Daniel.  All he wanted to do was get home and rest, maybe pop a beer and cop a squat in front of the tube, or possibly just take a nap.  He needed to get gas first, though... his car was running on fumes on the way in, and he might not make it home if he didn't stop.  He hated the rush hour commute, but living outside

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[kickthehobbit]

Daaaang! I was expecting some kind of twist-that they were going to rob him, maybe, but nothing like that! Well-done!

[mamas_minion]

Thank you I try not to be to predictable, by the way love your picture of Calcifer

LJ Idol Week 5: Recommendations!

[livejournal]

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[mamas_minion]

Thank you for reading and recommending my post.

[eternal_ot]

Wow! least expected of the twist...well done! Kept me hooked..

[mamas_minion]

Thank you, i'm glad it was able to keep you hooked till the end.

[jem0000000]

Great twist -- very unexpected (I was thinking either robbery or vampires/aliens). :)

[mamas_minion]

Thank you

[jem0000000]

You're welcome.

[mamas_minion]

Thak you I did not want to be obvious with this one.