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Mar 27, 2017 23:49

Drustan begrudgingly traversed the labyrinth of tunnels beneath his Apothecary heading to Vito’s subterranean headquarters, annoyed at being summoned for a meeting.  He noticed a sign above the entrance to Vito’s offices and was sure it had not been there before.  Since he’d arrived before the others, he made a quick check of each entrance to the ( Read more... )

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bleodswean March 29 2017, 16:02:09 UTC
Haha! Why is this so FUNNY? Your dialogue is simply a thing of complicated beauty. And count me as the crystal skull's No. 1 fangirl.

I loved this.

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mamas_minion March 29 2017, 19:09:47 UTC
With the topic I decided to go light hearted. I am glad you are a fan of Hisakawa. He is an interesting character.

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shadowwolf13 March 30 2017, 04:57:13 UTC
Great job!

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mamas_minion March 30 2017, 19:13:48 UTC
Thank you

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eternal_ot March 30 2017, 07:44:22 UTC
Haha. This turned out to be "Much Ado about Nothing" and it still kept me engaged through the dialogues. Nice take!

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mamas_minion March 30 2017, 19:14:48 UTC
Thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed it.

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rayaso March 30 2017, 16:56:57 UTC
I'm glad to see that Bad Management Techniques exist in this world, and even people who can arrive/leave in a flash have bad, pointless meetings. This was Meeting Hell, and a great response to the topic!

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mamas_minion March 30 2017, 19:21:54 UTC
Thank you, I think my real life boiled over on this one as I was stuck in a meeting when I started writing this.

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sinnamongirl April 1 2017, 20:44:39 UTC
Clever and well written, good job!

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mamas_minion April 3 2017, 20:32:32 UTC
Thank you

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