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Dec 15, 2004 21:17

well i just found this on my computer, and realized that i meant to post it a while ago. i wrote this poem for mrs. hahn's class, i can't remember exactly what the prompt was. but please read it and comment because it would mean a lot to me to hear if you guys have similar opinions. <3its not titled, but the jist of it is the way we're educated ( Read more... )

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_stillxdreaming December 15 2004, 21:22:37 UTC
i agree 100%. all we do is regurgatate (sp?) information. we study and cram for tomorrows tests and then forget info as soon as we turn in the tests. or i do. the only things i actually retain are the ones that greatly interest me. excellent poem emina browne :)

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mamapeeperz December 15 2004, 21:24:20 UTC
thanks! i must admit, when someone commented that fast i definitely thought it was gonna be gsacks. regurgitate i think <3

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adrenalinexrush December 15 2004, 21:32:56 UTC
holy fucken shit

that was awesome

PS -LOVED it

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mamapeeperz December 15 2004, 21:59:57 UTC
:) thanks

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iwantu2wantme16 December 15 2004, 21:51:17 UTC
emma that was seriously awesome...

i wish i could write poetry.

bleh. you rock.

<3

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mamapeeperz December 15 2004, 21:59:49 UTC
yeah i can only write if im inspired. and usually my poems are that style. with the rhyming and what not, yeah.

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ericmuerto December 15 2004, 21:55:24 UTC
That was wonderful, you should draw Dr. Seuss style pictures to go along with it.

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mamapeeperz December 15 2004, 21:59:10 UTC
yeah, rhyming often seems pretty elementary unless youre fucking shakespeare

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ericmuerto December 16 2004, 07:33:25 UTC
That's not what I meant. I love Dr. Seuss, he's a genius.

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felpy December 15 2004, 22:09:16 UTC
i cant explain how much i admire u. awesome poem.

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mamapeeperz December 15 2004, 22:22:59 UTC
:)

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