Drabble: "Wrong"

[mamalaz]

Title: Wrong
Author: MamaLaz
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Ron/Draco
Rating: R-NC17 (Gasp!)
Warnings: Adult Language.
Summary: Ron knows it's wrong, but it doesn't stop him from doing it.
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[snoopypez]

::FLAILS!!::

[mamalaz]

Arrgh, how come I never saw you flailing?! :D

[inthevast]

that was too short woman!

"Pale legs tossed over his shoulders, freckled hands clutching at a thin pair of hips and a headboard thumping and scraping so hard against the wall that it was tearing at the wallpaper."

this is such a powerful, hot image in my mind. this idea of Ron gripping Draco's little delicate hips... guh.

"hiss that slowly progresses into a long ragged choke"

woah, completely love all of these descriptions. even though this is extremely short you mangaged to get some really interesting developments out there. i love that Ron''s not content, that's he's torn between what's right and wrong, something that used to be so easy for him, and even Draco knows it.

that's awesome.

[mamalaz]

*grins* Aww, thanks hon! :D And yes, I know, it's so short! I think I tried to make it longer but bah, I'm rubbish :D

I'm so glad you liked it :D

[orange_bastard]

Short, but oh so sweet! I really enjoyed that ♥

[mamalaz]

Aww, thanks! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

[sexyscholar]

Pale legs tossed over his shoulders, freckled hands clutching at a thin pair of hips and a headboard thumping and scraping so hard against the wall that it was tearing at the wallpaper.

That is the happiest image in the world.

*FLAILS!*

That was...I mean...jfglkdjgpsogu;!!! *flails some more*

Brilliant, Mama.

[mamalaz]

*giggles* Thank you, hon! They're dirty :P

[hull1984]

Don't know how I could have missed this the first time round!! But I'm glad I caught it this time.

My word woman! Actually several words...most of which I couldn't possibly repeat here...!!

Sublimely gorgeous.

[mamalaz]

Heh. I want to know the several unrepeatable words, tease! ;)

Thanks, hon!