I do think it's good! It's succinct, not short. If you wanted to flesh it out a little bit more and interject some more of your thoughts into it I think it'd be a fantastic addition to the site. I especially liked some of your lines -- "both men are in love with her but their definitions of love are different," and "this is a tale about idealism versus cynicism; youth versus age; worldly experience versus academic brilliance." NICE. Insightful.
Incidentally, what were you planning on submitting? Because it's getting close to midnight... :)
I'm getting really excited/nervous/freaked out about this whole thing.
Didn't you get my email on Sunday. I don't think I'll have anything this week. But I'll forward you a word file for this and you can use this. I've been busy this week and i haven't had a chance to do any of the stuff that Jaymee wanted me to. To be fair I much rather prepare something good then do something half assed. Let me know how you are doing for content, and I'll email you this review.
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Incidentally, what were you planning on submitting? Because it's getting close to midnight... :)
I'm getting really excited/nervous/freaked out about this whole thing.
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