Interrupted (2/?, Tim/Roy and Jason, NC-17)

[malkavianlove]

Title:  Interrupted (2/?, Tim/Roy, Jason)
Fandom: DCU and Bat-Family
Pairings: Roy/Tim, Jason, with mentions of Roy/Dick and Bruce/Dick
Characters: Roy Haper, Tim Drake, Jason Todd, and mentions of other Bat-Family members.
Word Count: 1865
Rating: Adult, for slashy goodness
Warnings: Slash and one helluva tackle
Previous Chapter: Jealousy

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Comments

[darthbatgirl]

Okay that last line is great. "snickers" Sure Jason.

Aw Tim and Roy were so adorable in this. Roy was trying so hard to be sweet and romantic and make things special for Tim. It was just so sweet.

Wonderful new part hon.

[malkavianlove]

I'm really glad that you liked it. I know the narrative style changed a lot, but that's because Tim's inner voice is just so different from Jason's. Roy definitely wants to kill Jason, he worked so hard to make sure that the evening was perfect. Although Jason definitely made it a night to remember.

[malkavianlove]

I've been reading some of your Tim/Roy stories and they're awesome. I had no idea when I took your prompt that you'd written them so often and so well. I'm glad that you liked the story and that you think I do them justice.

[gemfyre]

TVTropes calls that "Suspiciously specific denial" Jason.

[malkavianlove]

Jason might have admitted he's jealous to himself, but I don't know if he's ready to admit it to Tim. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

[ladyblkrose]

"Jason cut him off before Tim could finish, “I’m NOT jealous. I’m really really not.”

Me thinks thou protesteth too much young grasshopper........

This went from sweet and lovingly seductive with Roy trying to ease his way into making love to Tim to hilarious with Tim's inner voice and Jason's rude interupption. wonderful balance and great pacing. I was kept interested the whole fic through.
Thanks for sharing this and I look forward to the next installment.

[malkavianlove]

I'm glad you liked it. Jason definitely is protesting too much, such is the burden of a guilty conscience. I'm just hoping I get the boys to play nice for the next chapter. *lol*

BTW: I love your userpic.

[doyou123]

oh, me like. me gusta.

[malkavianlove]

Woohoo! You liked it in two languages :D That's awesome. Thanks for commenting.

[larsinger29]

Oh Jason, methinks you doth protest too much.

I really liked seeing Tim's POV in this chapter. You did a great job outlining the development of the relationship between Roy and Tim, as well as set up the context with Jason. Roy was so adorable in his pursuit of Tim, from the wanting to take things slow to his nervous celebration of their anniversary to the very unsubtle yet sweet gift. Under all his snark and arrogance, Roy really is a big ol' softy.

Terrific chapter! This is so much fun to read! (oh, and hot too. Did I mention hot? Because, yeah, hot.)

[malkavianlove]

It's funny how different it is to write Tim's POV vs writing Jason's. Jason is so present, very in the moment. Tim's always been an incredibly mental character, so there's a totally different type of inner dialogue. It can take a lot for Roy to get him out of his own head. I'm glad you liked Roy's gift, he thought it was very subtle. But he also thought his reason for giving it was plausible. (He's pretty sure that Dick would've bought his reasoning.)

Jason is sooooo protesting too much. In his mind there is only one way Tim's question could've ended and he wasn't going to stand there and be accused of being jealous. I'm glad it was hot, I was going for hot. Hopefully next time will be hotter.

Thanks for telling me about darthbatgirl's writing. I've been checking it out and it's awesome.