Jester

May 29, 2010 21:30

chapter 1

Now the dark begins to rise
Save your breath, it's far from over

Talking and laughter wafted their way; carried by the sullen, summer breeze.
The sun had finally gone down, dragging the heat of the day with it. The temperature had plunged quickly into the night and it was all the little band could do to keep from shivering.
Talking and ( Read more... )

temper, matha

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i_write_vamps May 30 2010, 03:16:37 UTC
AIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well, first of all, as I mentioned before, I LOVE your writing style. It is so very REAL, and everything the characters feel, see, touch, hear... you can experience every emotion that they are sending. It is one of the many things I envy about your writing style ... how it seems almost as if I am actually in the story ( ... )

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