Comments | malfoil: Break and Shatter, NC-17 H/D

malfoil

Break and Shatter, NC-17 H/D

Jul 22, 2005 21:42

Title: Break and Shatter
Author: malfoilPairing: Harry/Draco ( Read more... )

Comments 23

rawlikesushi July 23 2005, 04:55:14 UTC

omg. i love this! It's so cute, with the ice skating.. and the smut is just perfect. Lovely!

malfoil July 23 2005, 05:43:48 UTC

Thanks so much! This is my first AU so I had no idea if it'd turn out all right.

Great icon, lol!

rawlikesushi July 23 2005, 14:23:57 UTC

it was awesome.. you dhould definitely write more!

malfoil July 24 2005, 02:46:47 UTC

Should I? Lol, I didn't think there'd be a positive response to this story. You're sweet. <3

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unsubtle July 23 2005, 05:57:06 UTC

*loves*

Great little ficlet, well written!

malfoil July 23 2005, 06:42:10 UTC

Thanks! I'm still pretty new to the writing thing, so it's good to know I'm off to a decent start. :D

laughs_muses July 23 2005, 08:00:57 UTC

This was great! Excellant imagery and a perfect balance of emotions. I liked very much how Harry was a little nervous...Draco should always intimidate somebody, so why not make it our hero?

Congrats on an awesome ficlet!

Jess

malfoil July 24 2005, 02:47:18 UTC

Exactly! I think Draco can be a very powerful influence, if he just sets his mind to it.

Thank you! :D

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malfoil July 24 2005, 02:48:15 UTC

Well, it was supposed to be AU which I guess means alternative universe (lol, I had to look it up) so that's why it's different probably. Thanks for reading it. :D

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malfoil July 24 2005, 02:48:39 UTC

Aww thanks! Glad you liked it!