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malefics

The Shadowed Wall

Nov 06, 2008 18:23

Harry Potter.
Neville + Snape, rated R for masturbation to orgasm.
A study about fear and the freedom of losing it.

( His skin turns warm when he thinks of this, and as an adult, he would like to say, 'Severus,' but can only whisper it to the shadowed wall beside his bed. )

f: harry potter

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malefics November 7 2008, 10:23:56 UTC

Thank you. I agree with both. Perhaps someday I'll delve into a real version of this pairing with a little more bite. It's hard for me to torment Neville too much, but... hotness could ensue.

greenschist November 7 2008, 14:49:08 UTC

Very well done. In just a few words, you really captured the constant push and pull of fear and courage that makes Neville so complex.

malefics November 9 2008, 13:17:07 UTC

Thank you so very much.

snegurochka_lee November 7 2008, 19:50:27 UTC

Very nice! I like the exploration of Neville's fear and trauma, and how it affected his adult life. And tying it to sexuality is really intriguing, the ways those wires could be crossed. :)

malefics November 9 2008, 13:18:06 UTC

Thanks! I thought so too. I have trouble not going a bit sexual, so I thought why not explore fear from this angle? I'm glad it worked for you.