OAC #1: What Cleanliness Is Next To

[malefics]

What Cleanliness is Next To
Les Miserables
Grantaire/Enjolras
R; shoe worship, masturbatory/explicit sexual images, angst

Opposites Attract Challenge info:
Word count: 1106
Opposition: Ideology/worldviewGrantaire is too old to be among these boys and too much of a cynic to be among these dreamers. He often thinks of each member of their little

Comments

[kenazfiction]

Exquisite. I'm usually not one for fetishy fics, but your descriptions are breathtaking. I particularly liked this:

There was no expression on his face, but the shadows of the flame created an ethereal air of suspicion.

And this:
Grantaire laughed. Even he could hear the dark, raw edge to the sound. "Any comparison between myself and our Savior would be a poor one, indeed. I'm just going to help you with your boots."

Just lovely.

[malefics]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

I couldn't make it any fetishy-er, because I sort of knew that to keep Enjolras ic, not much could really happen, but I thought it was still pretty effective. I usually hint at fetishes, though every so often there's something explicit and I have to -really- warn people. ;)

[shakespearian]

Stunning! Sad, and beautiful, and heart-wrenchingly *real*.

I have to applaud you so much for keeping both IC and yet making the story so sexy and so deep...

[malefics]

Thank you! I really tried, although to me it seems a bit rushed in places. Not bad for a first try on the OAC though. <3 How've you been?

[ajodasso]

Grantaire would take it, and in the first touch of skin on skin, he would experience an ecstasy that would pull him from his body as the bullets tore his flesh. He would witness, just before the final darkness closed his eyes, the orgasm of martyrdom in Enjolras' face.

As ending lines go, that's sheer brilliance. Well done.

[malefics]

Thank you! That's probably one of my two favorite parts.

[waxingobscure]

I squeed so loudly when I saw this...ENjolras/Grantaire is my fave pairing in the world, bar none.
It was fantastically written, with so many great lines I can't quote them all. Very in character....I loved it

[anonymous]

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