Thanks, Bee. :) I'm not really thrilled with how this came out, but I just wanted to do *something* with how scared out of her wits she probably is, in addition to her being ignorant/crazy/evil.
*nods* I understand what you mean. A little more length in the second section may even that out - it felt a bit too jumpy, even for this style. Then again, that may be me, being long-winded. :)
I quite liked it. A softer Bellatrix than what I've generally seen, but it's a very nice contradiction. When you remove the haze of the madness there are only fears and doubts, the cards, the tea, the crystal ball.
Just one nitpicky note; in case it slips you again - when Sirius bumps his mother
Oh! I see. :) I'm pretty sure 'into' is optional (although now that you mention it, maybe it's more correct to include it?), but I might go ahead and add it in. Thanks.
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Just one nitpicky note; in case it slips you again -
when Sirius bumps his mother
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I don't mean to be completely dense, but I'm not sure what you're nitpicking.
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