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maldoror_gw

One Piece Drabble: Aftermaths

Oct 06, 2006 18:15

I wrote a drabble. A bona fide drabble, under 300 words. I have never written anything this short before. Once I post this, I shall go check the weather channel to see when they expect that rain of fish tomorrow ( Read more... )

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Comments 19

beachlass October 7 2006, 00:48:43 UTC

I love the phrase

By contrast, Zoro's open rage, grief and lunatic determination were as refreshing as the sake, and the only thing that made his teacher smile these days.

and how you show Zoro's grief binding him closer to someone --- and having just finished watching a One Piece episode where Zoro was showing again how attached he gets to people... I think you've captured something characteristically Zoro. (and he's unlike certain other avengers we know)

stark_black December 10 2007, 01:59:51 UTC

What episode number is that!! I've been trying to find it so I can watch it again!

beachlass December 10 2007, 12:33:13 UTC

Oh dear... I really don't remember now.

inomuiro October 7 2006, 07:18:15 UTC

yay, there is a "this is the way samurai do things" feeling in this that I really like. Can't wait to read the other drabbels ^^

Mehla forgot the password again... anonymous October 7 2006, 15:15:09 UTC

Oooo. I like this lol. Man I'm only up to 185 on the episodes. I had a sudden burst of need to watch them a couple weeks ago. I haven't seen much of Robin's past yet. Not sure how far you have to go to see it...But I also don't know if the series is done or if there's more still being made and how many >_<.

I'm hopin you write up a non 1-shot one piece fic sometime. >_>..Zoro/Robin Robin/Zoro maybe? I just always thought they'd make an interesting couple. They generally react the least to most stuff that goes on around em unless it strikes something about their passion or childhood. Ya know? >_> I tried some of the sites you all posted last time but couldn't find a updated fic, or just one I could really get behind. Yaoi or non.

Anywho. I'm looking foward to more of your fics as always. ^_^.

Re: Mehla forgot the password again... maldoror_gw October 7 2006, 17:11:56 UTC

You have to get VERY far before seeing Robin's past, if I remember right. It's in the late 300 episodes (manga). The series is still ongoing, on ep 430 and still going strong ^_^

Good point about Zoro and Robin's reactions. They could really click, though I'm having a hard time writing any pairing in One Piece ^^;

Glad you liked the drabble ^_^

mehla_seraphim October 8 2006, 14:54:43 UTC

Omg...430? And still going? o_o...*goes back to watching more episodes*

maldoror_gw October 10 2006, 04:07:36 UTC

That's manga episodes, not anime. The anime is at...260 or something *cackles madly and runs off*

ashez anonymous October 8 2006, 22:21:41 UTC

Well, you could try going for the period after Usop's dad left (was he old enough to remember that?) instead of his mom's death. Anyways, I liked this. I thought it was a bit odd too that Kuina's dad was so stoic about her death (cue the conspiracy theories), but I guess the focus was meant to be on Zoro not him.

Re: ashez maldoror_gw October 10 2006, 04:06:51 UTC

There are several periods that I could pick for Usopp, but I just can't think of anything funny or insightful to write for it *sigh*

Yeah, I think you hit the nail on the head in regards to Kuina's dad. Of course, it looks massively odd taken realistically, but OP is not meant to be taken that way at all :P