BigBang: In A World So Wrong(Hold On) -- Part 6

[malbryn]

Comments

[blackpanther07]

This is awesome! Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

[malbryn]

Thank you for reading!

[wolf]

I loved this! Awesome job! :D

[malbryn]

Thanks <3 I'm happy you liked it!

[corbyinoz]

Really loved this, but you're going to hate me for saying - YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!

Seriously, I'm invested in this one. It's good. And I want to find out what happens in St Louis. What happened to Jeff? And Alona? What about Josh and his family? There are so many stories left to tell.

See what happens when you write a good story? Ungrateful bastards just demand more of it.

[malbryn]

Haha, I am writing more following this--there is so much I want to explore. But I didn't want to wrap everything in a neat little bow, I wanted to leave questions. Some of those questions will be answered, and some may be left open. I wanted this story to be about them finding each other in the mess of everything else, and I think I accomplished that.

I love that you're invested in this, it makes me feel like it was really worth writing. :D

[moviegeek03]

Very nice job! I loved the way you wrote the characters, especially Jared. It was so sweet and heartbreaking to read his journey and thoughts along the way. Great job!

[malbryn]

Aw, thank you!

[slothy_girl]

DONT LEAVE IT THERE OMG- i really like this story :) you should continue it!!!!

[malbryn]

I will be working on a sequel, but I felt like this story had come to a good end. Thanks for reading!