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Mal/River Prompt 17 - Cliff's Edge

Jun 30, 2006 16:32

Title: Cliff’s Edge
Author: Ana Sedai
Rating: PG
Character(s): River
Prompt: 071 - Fall
Word Count: 700
A/N: 17/100 for Mal/River Joss100.

Summary: An introspective piece (yes, another one) on falling, dreams, and waiting.

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Before Miranda, River had had no way to block anyone out. As Simon had said, she felt ( Read more... )

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Comments 11

ninamazing July 8 2006, 21:21:10 UTC

Not bad. Dude, this was really beautiful, and FINALLY I've read a physics reference that isn't stupid or incorrect. (Of course it would be you to put your knowledge to good use in fanfiction. :DDD )

Really fantastic. The way you've explored dreams is nice, and this is just what I like to see in post-Miranda fic. <3

ana_sedai July 9 2006, 03:44:58 UTC

See? I just knew that physics degree would come in handy someday... ;)

Thanks. I really enjoy doing this. Dreams are turning out to be kind of a thing with me, though I never intended them to be. I guess River's situation just lends itself naturally to closer ties between waking and sleeping. Have to be careful to not go overboard on that, however.