Comments | mal_river: Just A quick Drabble

dancinbutterfly in mal_river

Just A quick Drabble

Oct 03, 2005 02:34

Title: Conflict of Interests
Pairing: Mal/River
Rating: PG
Summary: Just a quick Mal POV drabble. 125 words. Unbeta'd. Sorry.
Spoiler: The movie
Author: Ellidyay

( Drabble with slight Serenity spoilers within )

title: c, author: dancinbutterfly

Comments 12

prozacpark October 3 2005, 07:48:33 UTC

I love this so much. This could fit so perfectly in that tiny flash of a scene we saw with Mal sitting by a chained River while he is talking to Book. It's lovely and wonderful and you managed to capture the conflict of the ship in such a short piece.

Thank you for posting this; it made me muchly happy. :)

dancinbutterfly October 3 2005, 17:41:38 UTC

I'm so glad you like it. I was really just trying to figure out Mal's voice. Hope I got it. ^-^ Feel free to write some too.

catvampcrazines October 3 2005, 15:30:19 UTC

oh, nicely done. I was hoping for some one to write something from that moment.

dancinbutterfly October 7 2005, 02:07:43 UTC

Glad i could fill that need!

michmak October 6 2005, 12:45:33 UTC

Really, really nice. I love drabbles that pack a punch - I sometime think a good drabble is harder to write that a longer story, because the words need to be chosen so carefully. This is lovely.

dancinbutterfly October 7 2005, 02:08:15 UTC

Wow. That means a lot. Thank you so much.

aikakone October 7 2005, 00:23:16 UTC

Awwww. Makes me want to see the movie again! I think I missed lots of shippery parts.

dancinbutterfly October 7 2005, 02:09:22 UTC

There were lots of shippery things. There's all sorts of good stuff. like that moment at the end. OMG!

fanfictionfan October 9 2005, 04:36:17 UTC

Lovely drabble, you captured Mal wonderfully.