Learning to Fly, Part X

[ninamazing]

Title: Learning to Fly
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Chapter: Ten. Previous chapters located here.
Word Count: 1720.
Rating/Warnings: PG-13.
Pairings/Characters: Mal/River. The OTP of Hot.
Spoilers: Large, for Serenity, the Dark Horse comic miniseries, and the River Tam Sessions.
Summary: There is much mackage, and Mal's shirt comes off. And Nina reveals

Comments

[jazzfic]

Whoa mary...thought you'd left this baby to fade away--but it's back!

"Mind if I take my boots off?"

Love it. And *hugs* for posting :)

[ninamazing]

No, it's just been a long and torturous process. Mostly because term sucks, and after awhile it has to be SUPER-good, because you can't take forever to post AND have a sucky chapter.

*hugs back* You rock so hard. I'm really glad to hear you liked it. :)))

[jazzfic]

Yeah...heard class is being a bitch for you right now. I'm stuck in the middle of writing a very long fic, but I need a break from it, so I'll whip up something for you. So watch this space, my dear ;)

[ninamazing]

It really, really is. I've never worked harder in my life and I'm still two points below passing. What?! Gack!!

EEE. I shall. *snugs* Way to brighten my day. :) And the best way of taking a break from a fic is to write another one. Heh heh heh.

[ana_sedai]

Whoa, cool, an Easter present! :D

Wonderful, beautiful, fantastic. (Though you kinda forgot a little bit at the end there, no? ;) ) Ah well, what does that matter when the rest was so very much worth waiting for? But I am glad to hear there's more coming soon. "DANGER!DANGER!DANGER!", huh? I can't wait!

Favorite line:

The thought that his ma, despite everything else in his life, would adore precious River made him smile

My utmost sympathies on the suckage that is school. When is it over for you?

[ninamazing]

*grins* Yes! An egg hunt ... and Mal and River making out. If only my Easter included shirtless!Mal. :P

I'm really glad you liked it! :DDD I keep trying to push the envelope and go a little further, but it's really hard for me to write sexy stuff without being either really, really bad (I caught myself using the word "MINISTRATIONS," for fuck's sake, and had to stop) or ridiculously cutesy. It's like, I know sex isn't like this in real life, but that's why we have fiction, right? Anyway, there's a balance. And I can't wait for you to read the next one either so I can see your comment.

HURRAY! That line came so close to not even being in it! :DDD But then I thought that I had to, because it above everything else would justify it. <3 SO glad you liked.

It's over ... May 27. Until then, I think I'm going to be in a state of constant worrying and hating myself. This term is ridiculous. I shouldn't even be doing badly, to hear my professors talk ... but anyway, rant for another time.

[donna_lynn]

I should be slapped for not seeing these wonderful stories earlier! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful and more wonderful.

[ninamazing]

Oh, but seeing all your comments in a row in my inbox made me smile so much!!! :DDDD Thank you so much for the glowing praise - I'm so glad I've made you happy, and I'll go back and reply to all your other comments ASAP, I promise. <3

You have some awesome M/R icons, too. Those two are just so pretty. ;)

[ninamazing]

YOU ARE THE BEST COMMENTER ON EARTH. GOD I LOVE WHEN YOU READ MY STORIES.

YES. YES.

*GLOMPS BACK*

AND OUR BABIES SHALL BE THE HOTTEST AND SEXIEST IN THE LAND.

... okay, that came out sketchier than I'd have liked.

[anonymous]

This is an amazing series. The only thing that would make it better is if I'd found it earlier! I'm looking forward to more!

[ninamazing]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad to please. :) And more is decidedly on its way.