Comments | mal_river: Learning to Fly, Part IX

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Learning to Fly, Part IX

Feb 03, 2006 04:21

Title: Learning to Fly
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Chapter: Nine. Previous chapters located here.
Word Count: 1450.
Rating/Warnings: PG-13.
Pairings/Characters: Mal/River. The OTP of Hot.
Spoilers: Large, for Serenity, the Dark Horse comic miniseries, and the River Tam Sessions.
Summary: Mal receives a stern talking-to for the first time since Ma Reynolds ( ( Read more... )

title: l, author: ninamazing, series: learning to fly

Comments 17

jazzfic February 3 2006, 10:27:58 UTC

I love this. It's such a rollercoaster of a story.

"So kill me," said Mal, and it wasn't a dare: it was a quiet admission of truth.

Oh, isn't that just so *Mal*

obsidianagirl February 3 2006, 10:45:15 UTC

Yeah, he would say it just like that and mean it, too.

*Sigh* He is such a great guy when Ninamazin's muse isn't all angsty and bendy.

Oh, sorry that's my muse...hers is just plain angstridden and mine is the bendy one.

MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE! PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!

SID *jumpin' up an' down like her kids at the toystore.

WOWZERS!!!!!!!!!! obsidianagirl February 3 2006, 10:42:22 UTC

OKAY...There seems to me that the next part is missing from my post...You see my part of the story ends here...

"My bunk," was all he said.

And I GORRAM know you didn't just throw another cliffie at me...in my already fragile state are ya tryin' ta kill me?

So, if you would please send the next part on?

HOLY MOLLEY!

THat was good...makes up for all the bad-evil-angsty-plots!

You better plan on stayin' up late and skippin' that fancy schoolin' until we get some satisfaction out of ya!

LOL

SID

elgaladangel February 3 2006, 11:34:38 UTC

...YAY.

And all is well in the world of Mal/River!! SQUEE! Thank you for updating so quickly!

gwenfrewi72 February 3 2006, 13:05:50 UTC

I concur with Sid and Elgaladangel. I just Squeed when I saw you'd posted again so soon.

Thanks and keep up the good work!

Gwenfrewi

sqeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! anonymous February 3 2006, 13:22:45 UTC

Oh my, this story has me torn between givin Mal a big ol' hug or shovin his sorry (but delectable)ass out the airlock!! Thank goodness the hug won. Like River I could forgive him practically anything. River was so sweet in this chapter. The tension between Mal and Simon with Kaylee on the sidelines was intense - nice job of portraying Simon in protective big brother mode. OH so now they're off to Mal's bunk for first time make-up sex....hmmmmm I'll be in my own bunk, popcorn in hand, waiting patiently for the sexual olympics to begin. (just so's ya know this story gets a gold medal!) angie b