Comments | mal_river: Blitz! Learning to Fly, Chapter 8.

ninamazing in mal_river

Blitz! Learning to Fly, Chapter 8.

Feb 01, 2006 05:08

Remember this, my friends: angst only makes the sex hotter.

Title: Learning to Fly
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Chapter: Eight. Previous chapters located here.
Word Count: 1521.
Rating/Warnings: PG-13.
Pairings/Characters: Mal/River. The OTP of Hot.
Spoilers: Large, for Serenity, the Dark Horse comic miniseries, and the River Tam Sessions.
Summary: Mal and ( Read more... )

title: l, author: ninamazing, series: learning to fly

Comments 12

anonymous February 1 2006, 11:58:34 UTC

OMG! The angst! The pain! We're doomed! Who's *flying* this thing?!

Oh right. That would be you. ;) Not to worry. I'm confident you'll get it sorted out. Please make it be soon. WIP's and angst are a stomach-churning combination. Great work!

ninamazing February 3 2006, 08:52:33 UTC

*dies laughing* Don't worry, I've got the next part all written already.

Extra points for your usage of Firefly quotes in your feedback. I'm very pleased you enjoyed it, and thanks MUCH for the comment!!

gwenfrewi72 February 1 2006, 14:53:19 UTC

Argh! Mal you fool. Youst best fix it and fix it quick or River will be gone. Gone I say.

ninamazing February 3 2006, 08:53:14 UTC

Worry not; she'll stick around. Wouldn't you? ;)

gwenfrewi72 February 3 2006, 12:59:12 UTC

Heck, I'd stick around no matter what that tastie man did.

obsidianagirl February 1 2006, 15:04:18 UTC

Okay, I'm seein' light...its dim but its there. And Holy Freakin' God! Is Zoe gonna die? Is Mal gonna be able to pull out of his flat spin? Is Simon going to be the big brother and talk PLAIN to the dumb as dirt Captain? Will River kick Mal's ass or snog him senseless?

Thank you for updating so quickly...I can't take long drawn out angst...it gives me a stomach ache.

Also, I liked this keep them coming!

Sid

ninamazing February 3 2006, 08:54:00 UTC

*physically restrains self from answering all your questions and spoiling the rest of the story*

Thank YOU for reading and commenting!

erinya February 1 2006, 20:40:08 UTC

O_O Please don't kill Zoe!

I just want Mal and River to be happy again. :-( You're killing us here with the angst, woman!

But the writing is still lovely. You must update again soon or we'll all collapse from the suspense.

ninamazing February 3 2006, 08:55:44 UTC

(Okay, don't tell anybody I said this, but as IF I would actually kill a character! Pish. I'm barely even cool enough to WRITE Zoe, let alone kill her. *loves Zoe*)

Sorry, sorry! It's only because I suck at humor. :P Heh.

Thank you so much for the compliment on my writing - I'm very glad you think so, and I live on feedback. And I've got the next part already, so. :)

anonymous February 2 2006, 05:48:02 UTC

Ahh! That's all I can say right now, im in distress..it's amazing...the way you write and the emotions one feels when reading this...I must say I love you

ninamazing February 3 2006, 08:56:33 UTC

:))))))))))))))))

Thank you ever so kindly!!! That's one of the best comments I've ever received. :)))))