So, chapter 2 is too long to make for an actual post on here, and so I've just included the link to the page at AO3 because I couldn't split the chapter into two. There was so much to include in order to set up the dynamic of my Mal and River, that splitting it into two chapters just didn't work.
Enjoy :)
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Loving the story so far!
Not to nitpick, but Kelvin isn't measured in degrees. It is its own units, so you would just say 10,000 Kelvin.
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I like to be nitpicked on things I don't know, as that's how we learn :D
Thank you for reading and more importantly enjoying my story! Hopefully, chapter 3 will be short enough to actually post on here. I don't know why I prefer it that way, but I do.
Chapter 4 is taking a bit of work, it seems, but I managed to unglue the pair long enough to make four pages of dialogue, which I consider progress LOL
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