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shortitude in mal_river

The Way The Water Loves (Series)

Jan 12, 2006 18:22

Title: The Way The Water Loves ( Read more... )

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faith_less_one January 12 2006, 17:47:17 UTC

OMG!!!!!

Can I just say that "We’ll find matches." is one of the best post-Miranda River lines I've ever read. A perfect mix of lucid and crazy.

Zoe's pregnant!!! Yay!!!!!

Can't wait to read more.

shortitude January 12 2006, 17:52:41 UTC

So glad you liked it. At first Zoe was the one to say Matches, and then River would say "We'll find a lighter", but then when I changed it to River saying "We'll find matches", it made it all more sublime and homey. Zoe pregnant will be a fun thing to see, I'd assume.

gwenfrewi72 January 12 2006, 20:02:34 UTC

Oh my god. I have read tons of fanfics but this is the first one to make me cry. (And I read sappy romance novels that don't do anything to me, so that's saying something.)

More, I beg, and plead for more!

shortitude January 12 2006, 20:10:51 UTC

I've recieved many reviews, and this one makes me want to write more right now! Please choose the next character River can "heal". Hmmm?

gwenfrewi72 January 12 2006, 20:28:14 UTC

Descisions, descisions. Hmm, maybe Jayne getting over Book.

shortitude January 12 2006, 20:28:56 UTC

Thought about Jayne too, you know? Yes, he'll do. *musses*

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Love riverxreynolds January 13 2006, 02:22:54 UTC

So am loving this

Re: Love shortitude January 13 2006, 23:13:53 UTC

Thank you.

jasonlizfan January 13 2006, 02:48:21 UTC

I love River having Zoe talk to Wash and a baby Wash on the way! :)

Phenomenal story! Looking forward the next chapter.

shortitude January 13 2006, 23:16:05 UTC

Thank you, thank you! Next chapter should be up today. And it's...Jayne's turn! *cheers*

ninamazing January 13 2006, 14:10:55 UTC

OMG yes. Seriously, everyone wants Zoe to be pregnant. :D

River mouthing "healing" and Mal going away was just perfect. Also, so was River kissing Serenity - because it's so cute and completely something I could see her do.

This is more believable River-healing-Zoe than I've read in awhile, and I like it.

shortitude January 13 2006, 23:15:22 UTC

I know, a baby on board would be so cute! [has just got an idea!]
I'm glad you liked the River mouthing "healing and Mal going away scene, it was my favourite. River pretty much loves Serenity, because Mal's told her that's what she needs to fly. And River always listens to Mal. Duh.