Burn fic

[doi2life]

Shoot...the first time I posted it got screwed with... let's see if it works right this time, eh?

Burn

Author: Jass/doi2life
Rating: G-PG
Pairing: Mal/River (brief mentions of Simon/Kaylee)
Feedback? Yes, please!
Comments: My first fanfic post here- shiney. I'm a little iffy about it, since it really ain't my usual style- but then again, I'm used to

Comments

[ferociouswalrus]

I enjoyed it. It was one of the more coherent River POVs I've seen, which is not to say that it's OOC... it worked for me. I liked the initial description of how she felt, like she thought she was sick at first. That really helped me understand exactly how she was feeling. Very lyrical, as has been said.

[felicity_dream]

Nice, especially for your first time writing in this fandom. Though, I can't say I'm really a good judge on things, seeings as how I haven't really posted any of my own work for this pairing. I hope to see more of your stuff. It would be nice to make another piece with more dialogue and character interaction.