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#179 Breath

Oct 20, 2015 11:46

Title: Breath
Prompt: #179
Rating: PG
Length: ~4230 words
Summary: Jongin is angry that Sehun is avoiding it all.
Warning(s): Nothing well except, I have little knowledge of asthma.
Notes: I have a soft spot for these kind of storylines. I’m sorry the story might lack in some aspects but I hope you enjoy it. Also I have done some research about ( Read more... )

day 1, 2015, rating: pg

Comments 8

yeolreum October 20 2015, 15:07:32 UTC

Hi!!!
When I first started reading, I thought that Sehun was planning a surprise and then I thought that Sehun is cheating on Jongin. Thankfully, he's just a little confused in the end.
Jongin is so adorably sweet in this; the painting of their family, how he wants to give in to Sehun and everything. Jongin is just a cutie.
As for Sehun, that poor kid, I think it can be overwhelming to accept a new family member all of a sudden in spite of how long you've thought of it. Luckily, there's Tao to pull him back (and I thought he was having an affair with Tao at first!!!! conveniently forgetting that this is a sekai exchange).
Thank you for the good read!!

miliaax October 20 2015, 17:44:38 UTC

Oh my god that's so cruel I was sure Sehun was going to leave with Tao and Jongin would be left alone with a kid! Poor Jongin for having to go through that pain of thinking Sehun was cheating on him. Also so cute Jongin for painting a family picture, too adorable ;w; thank you for writing this!

cjoycemd86 October 20 2015, 21:07:29 UTC

Omg i would have cried if this turned into a TaoHun infidelity scenario. But thankfully that didnt happen since Sehun was just scared. Lol

Poor Jongin going thru that & thinking Sehun was cheating on him and didnt love him anymore. Oh & the idea of the painting was so touching. Glad this ended well and happy.

Thanks for sharing this fic! :)

anonymous October 22 2015, 03:01:40 UTC

For a second there, i was worried that i look around for any angst tag or something...

But i love jongin character here..

Initially sehun is an as*
Thank god tao bring him back~

Sekai with kids is just complete to me!

harujongin October 26 2015, 08:56:26 UTC

domestic sekai is definitely one of my favs, even more so when a cute child is included ♡

i wasn't too worried about sehun cheating because jongin was always on his mind. i was annoyed at sehun though for leaving jongin alone and doing everything by himself so i'm glad tao talked sense into him.

thank you for writing this lovely fic ♡