What are you talking about?! It was brilliant! And Yamamoto is the type to do things out of the blue/just because he feels like doing it.
I don't know if I should be proud of the fact that I guessed the attack before you wrote it lol Also Gokudera you cheater, preparing the whole building beforehand.
You took both chars very very well, since Gokudera's insecurities to his stubbornness to win/prove himself and Yamamoto's care for Gokudera and his determination once he puts his mind into it.
Heh, it's the first time I've ever written something intending for it to be gen, only to have one character demand to be allowed to make out with the other. I really wasn't sure how well it ended up, so thanks. |D
Lol, I tried to stick to canon as best as I could when it came to their attacks and strategies, so if you saw it coming that's probably not a bad thing. And haha, yes, he's totally a cheater. Though he'd probably call it "being prepared." XD (I SURE HOPE NO ONE WAS LIVING IN THAT BUILDING. I think it was probably condemned or something, so it's okay if they damaged it a little... or a lot.)
|D I almost feel guilty because I really did intend for this to be strictly gen right up until I got to the last few paragraphs. I guess it's still mostly gen anyway in spite of that. Glad you liked it (and who doesn't love a good dogfight? ♥)!
I still think you write the best Yamamoto I've ever read. And this was so very bad ass and kick ass and IC and SO well done--ajskldfja I DON'T KNOW HOW ELSE TO spazz and go ILU and omg. I really enjoyed it!! (WHEE and 8059~~~ always makes me happy. 8'D)
SDLKSJ THANK YOU. |D HAHA I DON'T REALLY KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY. I'm glad you liked it, which is a really subdued way of saying that to have someone say that about my characterization KIND OF PUTS ME ON CLOUD NINE, OMG. ♥ ♥ ♥
THANK YOUUUUU, and I try to make them as visual as possible (ignoring how YOU CAN'T ACTUALLY DO THAT WITH WORDS, but you know what I mean), so I'm hoping that's a good thing, lol. And I'm glad you liked the ending too! ♥
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I don't know if I should be proud of the fact that I guessed the attack before you wrote it lol Also Gokudera you cheater, preparing the whole building beforehand.
You took both chars very very well, since Gokudera's insecurities to his stubbornness to win/prove himself and Yamamoto's care for Gokudera and his determination once he puts his mind into it.
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Lol, I tried to stick to canon as best as I could when it came to their attacks and strategies, so if you saw it coming that's probably not a bad thing. And haha, yes, he's totally a cheater. Though he'd probably call it "being prepared." XD (I SURE HOPE NO ONE WAS LIVING IN THAT BUILDING. I think it was probably condemned or something, so it's okay if they damaged it a little... or a lot.)
T-thank you, I'm glad you thought it was IC. ♥
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I-I kind of meant it because I'm kind of obsessed with Yamamoto orz. PFFFF HE WOULD TOTALLY CALL IT BEING PREPARED.
Your welcome honey :) ♥~
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Heh. ♥
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I don't even read 8059 anymore but you lured me right in and I wanted to stay through the shounen fighting because I love gen and dogfights.
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I still think you write the best Yamamoto I've ever read. And this was so very bad ass and kick ass and IC and SO well done--ajskldfja I DON'T KNOW HOW ELSE TO spazz and go ILU and omg. I really enjoyed it!! (WHEE and 8059~~~ always makes me happy. 8'D)
SO much love! ♥♥♥
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