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demoerin November 18 2010, 19:59:41 UTC
Ryohei slapped him. A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away, Obi-Wan Kenobi felt a disturbance in the Force.

“I KNEW IT!” shouted Aoba victoriously, and without wasting a second more, he spun toward Ryohei and slapped him so hard Yamamoto woke up from his coma.

IT IS PERFECT. ALL OF IT. IT COULD NOT BE MORE PERFECT!

“We’re tied for slaps!” Aoba announced once Gokudera had finished defeating Shitt P (you call it wishful thinking; I call it LA LA LA I CAN’T HEAR YOU).
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. (I'm resigned, myself.)

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makeste November 18 2010, 20:28:53 UTC
I was originally going to end this fic with a double KO slap, but I abandoned that idea because I ran out of slap jokes. XD

(I'm resigned, myself.)

Canon keeps giving all these little hints that he's doomed (the fact that his win would put the Vongola in the lead and HEAVEN FORBID that should happen; the fact that Amano got rid of the C.A.I. presumably because with it he could have destroyed every one of those balloons in a matter of seconds), but it makes me too sad to think about. ESPECIALLY WITH HIS RIGHT HAND MAN PRIDE ON THE LINE. COME ON, KID, YOU CAN STILL PULL THROUGH. >_>

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demoerin November 19 2010, 15:08:22 UTC
Oh, that really does put a sad spin on the "Gokudera loses" scenario ... HAHAHAHAHA. Sorry, imagining Gokudera's face. hahahahaaaaa

But if he does lose, it's totally going to be a noble sacrifice. I dunno, he has to fling himself in front of Lambo/Tsuna/Reborn's lazy butt at a critical moment and forgo a win. possibly Shitt P will get to go "See, you should totes fight for yourself", but the Vongola will shoujo sparkle at each other and know he's done the right thing.

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makeste November 19 2010, 18:42:07 UTC
Oh, that really does put a sad spin on the "Gokudera loses" scenario ... HAHAHAHAHA.

:(!!!

Sorry, imagining Gokudera's face.

Trying... not to laugh... damn it!

Fffff but however he does end up losing (sob), I want it to be in a way where Shitt P realizes she was wrong about Gokudera and LOVE AND FRIENDSHIP ARE BEAUTIFUL THINGS AND IT IS TOTALLY OKAY TO PUT YOUR MOST IMPORTANT PEOPLE FIRST IF THEIR HAPPINESS IS WHAT MAKES YOU HAPPY AND THEY WERE THE ONES WHO TAUGHT YOU HOW TO HAVE PRIDE AND CONFIDENCE IN YOURSELF IN THE FIRST PLACE. Because I am petty and I want him to be vindicated and to be all "IN YOUR FACE, I WAS RIGHT!" except, you know, without being a jackass about it. XD

...it just occurred to me that my desire to see Gokudera win is not so much about improving his win/loss record or having him not go off to prison as it is just about seeing him get to be right for once. As a character who's made so many mistakes in the past, he's earned the right to have a smart moment where he's cool and dignified and in control and ( ... )

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HOW DOES IT TASTE? IT TASTES PAINFUL, DOESN'T IT! makeste November 18 2010, 20:39:59 UTC
Reborn may not have Byakuran and Uni's parallel world-spying ability, but he's familiar enough with the fourth wall that I'm sure he knows enough about the original Aoba/Ryohei fight to dread it. XD

And aww, that sucks. :( *PAT PAT* I hope you can see it soon? ;;

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This was legen--wait for it... bearit November 18 2010, 20:09:41 UTC
*dies*

*dies*

*dies*

You, ma'am, win the Internets.

--DARY!!!

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makeste November 18 2010, 20:41:27 UTC
*makes a note to thank Barney Stinson in my Internets acceptance speech* :'D

Haha, glad you liked it! <3

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morgrix November 18 2010, 20:28:04 UTC
THIS IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN THE ORIGINAL!!!

I lol'd. This fic is pure win.

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makeste November 18 2010, 20:42:50 UTC
I THOUGHT SO, MYSELF.

Heh, thank you! ♥

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makeste November 19 2010, 18:20:24 UTC
Let's face it, fourth walls are becoming a thing of the past. We don't need them in this bold new modern age.

*sits in a corner with fingers in ears focusing on all the awesome things Gokudera did in the recent chapter while ignoring the direction the plot tides are turning in* >_>

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