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Star Wipe All Your Past Away

Oct 04, 2007 14:08

Title: Star Wipe All Your Past Away
Author: makemebreak
Rating: PG-13, some language
Word Count: 2202
Summary: This is my heart, there are many like it, but this one is mine. It is my life. I must master it as I must master my life. Without me my heart is useless. Without my heart, I am useless.
Notes: Beta'd by echoelf How much does she rule? Way more than you guys ( Read more... )

brendon/spencer, juliecakes, fic

Comments 13

sweetrecovery October 4 2007, 20:54:38 UTC

Oh, Melinda. This is perfect. My heart hurt in a good way at the end. I know you hate to write dialogue, but it was so good. Seriously, so, so good. Never worry again about writing dialogue, because you don't suck at it. You even managed to work Jesse Lacey's crazy volcano into this fic.

I loved how you went through each band member, showing how Ryan and Jon each had a piece of Spencer's heart, and baby!Ryan and Spencer, and Jon Walker being... Jon Walker. And you saved Brendon for last.

"I know you think I don't take care of anything. I know that. I know I'm bouncy and hyper and spastic and every other word you like to use to describe me when you think I'm not listening. I'm always listening, Spence. Always. So. Um. I thought maybe it would go better, you know, my whole winning your heart thing. Because I'm going to, Spencer Smith. I'm going to get your heart for my very own." <333333333

Thank you for this. I loved it.

makemebreak October 4 2007, 21:18:44 UTC

Did you use the sexy Ryan Adams icon? You did not just go there. While I was posting, the whole time, I was like "She's going to think it's so lame. Seriously, just go drown yourself in the work toilets."

Yeah. Fun. Come onlineeeee.

sweetrecovery October 4 2007, 21:23:19 UTC

The sexy Ryan Adams icon... I had to. Don't ever think about drowning yourself in the work toilets again.

I can't come online! I have dinner reservations for 6:30 and a bunch of errands before that. I'll be on tonight after The Office. (8 your time.)

sweetrecovery October 4 2007, 20:55:43 UTC

YOU USED "JULIECAKES" AS A TAG! Juliecakes <3s Melindapants. It's true.

makemebreak October 4 2007, 21:19:18 UTC

OF COURSE I DID! WHAT OTHER TAG COULD BE USED? THE ANSWER TO THAT QUESTION IS NO OTHER TAG!

sweetrecovery October 4 2007, 21:24:06 UTC

I have to go tag my Jon/Gabe stories "melindapants" when I get home from dinner.

ovidien October 4 2007, 21:32:31 UTC

i love love your brendon. so so much it makes me hurt a little bit. you're the reason i love him so much, you know? i'm sure you know that, i've told you that already-

<3

moondarri October 7 2007, 11:33:08 UTC

This was just lovely. Very different to a lot of the usual style you get in fanfic. I loved the progression of the characters & the way you described Spencer's relationship with each of the boys. This was really wonderful, soft & sweet & just lovely.

makemebreak March 7 2008, 04:47:12 UTC

Wow. This reply is. You know. Mega late.

But that you for the comment on the story. I write so sporadically that I forget to check my inbox on older stories. Or leave comments to like. Five months later. ANYWAY. I'm glad you liked it because Spencer is someone I really worry about getting right.

writingblind October 8 2007, 22:24:30 UTC

Brendon got a piece of my heart with this fic.
Unusual in a way, which made it even more special. It was very pretty.

makemebreak March 7 2008, 04:51:50 UTC

So, I'm responding to comments about a million years late. But I'm glad that Brendon won you over. He should always be someone who is loved.