Part 2 - Screw You, We're From Texas

[makeit_takeit]

Comments

[dr_ducktator]

two things I love about this chapter (besides the obvious awesome that it is):
1. Fried pickles
2. Detroit Pistons!!

[twinsarein]

Awesome! They're living together, just as they're meant to. You have a nice flowing style, and I love ll the relationship - they are very natural and real.

[phoenix_greece]

your evil you know that, right? I have to read further, yeah I am a junkie I know thank you. Wont give a big comment now (maybe later though). Just the line of Gabby was AWESOME:
“You’ve seen him, right? I’m taken, not dead.”

*loooooooooool*

your amazing.

[celerywench]

Question- is Chen's first name Chen or Freddy?

[makeit_takeit]

Ha! I had a character list that I worked up when I was making notes before I got started writing, and his name there is Fred Chen. Sometimes in my eagerness to make the dialogue sound real, and also due to my deeply ingrained hatred of exposition and too much detail, I think I may have left a little too much unspecified from time to time :)

[keerawa]

Dear Amy - If you want a fixer-upper, get a house, not a guy.
Dear Jensen - Moral compasses are meant to be internal, not external.
Terribad situation, and completely realistic.