Laws of Attraction - Chapter Forty-Three: No Time Like the Present [Part Four]

[major_roon]

Title: Laws of Attraction
Author: Major Roon
Fandom: The Closer
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon
Rating: NC-17/M

Comments

[major_roon]

Oh, shush, you know that never works - the whip and all - I like it too much ;)

[a_proposito]

okay, i'm a mess really atm. i mean, i laughed so hard in the beginning but now i'm just so sad to see it end :'(

i'm so glad you did write Sharon's POV after all! it was extremely amusing but also touching and revealing. it's an interesting choice to end it here but very logical at the same same: the gap between S5&6 canon!Sharon and S7 canon!Sharon is so huge that i never stopped wondering what the hell happened between her and Brenda to cause it. a break-up would explain it up to a point ))

anyway i should stop mumbling 'cause what i'm really trying to say is that i love this fic so very much, your writing is truly wonderful and your effort is definitely very much appreciated. thank you so much for this story! and i can't wait to read what you'll come up with next :D

[major_roon]

You know what, I'm sad that it's ended as well. It feels like I've been writing this fic for the longest time.

But, there's a new beginning. I'm planning to explore what happens between Brenda and Sharon between s6 and s7, there is always a chunk missing.

Anyway, thank you so much - you've been reading this for the longest time as well, stuck with it, and I'm extremely grateful for that. I truly appreciate it.

The sequel will hopefully come along quickly, I've got it all written in my head already :D

[a_proposito]

oh i cannot wait to read your take on what happened between these two there! and rest assured i'll stick around as long as you're willing to share your marvellous writing :D

[somniesperus]

I had a feeling, when I saw this was from Sharon's POV, that we were heading into the final chapter. I think it works really well. I love how Sharon comes to consciousness while somehow *still* remaining in denial--she can admit she's gay to Morales, she can take steps to end a painful situation, she can remember cornering Brenda in the kitchen, but she doesn't ever seem to recall that Brenda began by saying "no" while Sharon was the one who kept pushing for a hotel room. Now the Manolo is on the other foot. This strikes me as realistic, since in real life it's often so convenient to forget how we ended up in a mess, and Sharon can't be expected to deal neatly with everything all at once. Meanwhile, Brenda's the one who's left with a distant husband, a big secret, and unsatisfied need. Sharon started out the story as the loner, while Brenda was the one with functional friends and family. Now the opposite seems to be true, especially if Sharon really is going to queer it up with Morales & Co

[major_roon]

I'm glad I finally got to write this fiction from Sharon's point of view - it was very interesting to see Brenda through her eyes; the blonde's actions don't always seem as transparent and obvious when you don't have insight into her thought-process

[sitcomgirl90]

It's over? :'(

I have to say this is probably my favorite fic of anything I ship. This story really what sealed the deal when I started to explore brenda and sharon. This will always be a special fic to me and I cant wait to read the sequel!

[major_roon]

Yep, over and I'm sad too :( It feels strange to end something you've been committed to for such a long time.

I'm working on the sequel and hopefully I can post something soon.

Thank you so, so much for all the reviews, I truly appreciate them and I hope you'll enjoy the sequel as well.

[caity_love]

OH GODS. I had a heart attack seeing "THE END". I am really glad you are going to do a sequel, because I don't know if I can handle not waiting on updates about these two.

I really loved how you wrote Sharon in this chapter. It was nothing short of breathtaking to witness her emotions like this. Great job!

Can't wait for the sequel!

[major_roon]

Writing Sharon was a treat. The switch was hard initially but once I had gotten started properly, Sharon just flowed. I'm glad you enjoyed reading her point of view.

Anyway, thank you very much. I can hopefully post something new soon, fingers crossed.