FINALLY!!! I am getting the chance/time to reread this last chapter and leave you some proper feedback.
Please forgive me for taking so long... the day I'd planned to do so, my modem died, and I had no internet all night... and also, my muse has been in high gear working on her own fic, and well, it's been so long since she's been so inpsired to write this way, that well... yeah... could not not write. *G*
But let's get to the important stuff... feedback!!
Brenda just was weak when it came to fathers.
Oh, Sharon nailed that one!! Brenda truly is, isn't she?!
“Is that supposed to be my Christmas present?” Sharon put her hands in the pockets of her blazer, clicking and clacking after the woman.
“No, Cap’n.” Brenda said over her shoulder. “I got somethin’ else for you...”I know it's not what I'm thinking/hoping... but still, I got a goofy grin on my face the first time I read this
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Please forgive me for taking so long... the day I'd planned to do so, my modem died, and I had no internet all night... and also, my muse has been in high gear working on her own fic, and well, it's been so long since she's been so inpsired to write this way, that well... yeah... could not not write. *G*
But let's get to the important stuff... feedback!!
Brenda just was weak when it came to fathers.
Oh, Sharon nailed that one!! Brenda truly is, isn't she?!
“Is that supposed to be my Christmas present?” Sharon put her hands in the pockets of her blazer, clicking and clacking after the woman.
“No, Cap’n.” Brenda said over her shoulder. “I got somethin’ else for you...”I know it's not what I'm thinking/hoping... but still, I got a goofy grin on my face the first time I read this ( ... )
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