Fanfic: The Sound of Silence

[majincammy]

Title:  The Sound of Silence
Pairing: Arizona/Callie
Rating: R
Summary: Speculation after the crash.
Disclaimer: I own nothing.  I do not intend to profit in any way, shape or form by posting this story.  It's for fun, nothing more, and nothing less.

A/N:  I started this after episode 8x23, so I didn’t have all the info that happened in the finale, so

Comments

Baby J!

[brittlovesher]

You're pretty freakin' awesome, you know that? Seriously, you are.

I love this story so very much for so many reasons. I love, love the opening paragraph that talks about the silence. It's so powerful and emotional. It really strikes the epitome of the crash and how the only sound Arizona hears is nothing as she barely clings to life

Re: Baby J!

[majincammy]

You know, I completely forgot about Hahn when I was in Callie's mindset. I really don't think Callie thinks about her ever.

Thank you for the kind words. You know how critical I am of myself and it took a lot for me to get through this, so I'm really not sure if there will be another part. You know I'm working on ATGB also.

I'm really glad you liked it. And you like how I write Sofia! I find her to be amazingly cute and I just try to bring that out in any scene where she is in. :x

I think Mark is going to blow up, it felt natural to write him in this way. I'm interested to see what they actually do with him if he survives the accident.

I can't thank you enough for your encouragement. Without you, I'm not sure I would have ever finished this story, or even kept writing. You're the amazing one, Bee. Thank you again. <3

[shinara66]

This was your best work yet, IMO! Honestly! You captured the emotions perfectly. Arizona being so haunted and scared and lost in this was so spot on. I hope the show gives us something similar.

Arizona has been through a lot recently. She's resilient and is the queen of compartmentalizing, but one person can only take so much. You managed to portray that really well!

I felt awful for Callie. She was so happy that Arizona was alive, but having to see everything she is going through and feeling helpless can't have been easy on her. The way she just accepted Arizona yelling her frustrations at her was so vivid and sad. Good job there, honestly!

I really hope this isn't a one shot. Just another longer piece to show some progress and stability would be great...as a maaaaybe belated birthday gift to me? Hm? What's that? You'll do it for me? Oh, you! You're the greatest! Thanks!

Seriously, awesome work!

[majincammy]

Oh my god, totally in seventh heaven here. Not only did you comment, but you called this my best work yet. Pardon me as I dance a little in my chair here!

Okay, I danced it out. Squeeee~!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I was trying to really be organic and in the moment with the characters and I really feel that Arizona only opens up to Callie because she feels Callie is a safe way for her to let it out. I think Callie understands it, it's why she can take it.

I have been having a lot of trouble writing recently. I started this the night episode 23 aired and I just finished it earlier today. But I was happy with how I ended it, so that it could be a one shot, or if I get an idea, I can write more, so if I get hit in the head with an idea, I will totally write more. ;)

Thank you again so much, you have no idea how much it means to me to see your comment and praise. It truly makes me want to write more. <3

[shinara66]

Aw! You're so sweet! I'm glad my simple little comment could make you so happy! You totally nailed the organic feel! Nothing seemed forced and dull. It was a really easy read that flowed so wonderfully and impacted so deeply.

I agree with you about Arizona opening up to Callie because she is safe. Also, TOTALLY understand having issues writing. lol. It happens to the best of us. ;)

Anyway, great work again. I really enjoyed it! If I comment on this one story over and over and over, will that help your muse want to write a second part? bwhahaha! J/K!

[majincammy]

Haha, I don't know if it's going to get me to write more, but it definitely makes me feel more secure about this particular piece of fanfiction. I'm my own worst critic. lol

I really will consider it, I just need to wait for that smack of inspiration. If it comes, I will definitely write another chapter to it, I promise! <3

Wow

[nsabeeh]

I am bowled over by this fix and can say for a certainty that this is one of the most apt and painfully written fic. Its heart wrenching to see Ari in this much pain, physically and emotionally and to see Callie at her wit's end, unable to help the woman she loves but, not giving up.

Can not wait for more. Write soon. Your muse should be proud.

Cheers

Noni

Re: Wow

[majincammy]

Thank you so much. I truly, truly appreciate it.

I'm glad I was really able to tell this story so well. It was hard for me to write at parts, which is why it took so long to get out. Thank you so much for your praise, I cannot thank you enough. <3

[majincammy]

You are the biggest fan of the opening prologue to the story. lol Thank you so much, I really try to get her right and do her justice, given she's my all time favorite character ever!

You totally inspired the fight when we talked the other night! I'm really proud of how it came out, it was better than I anticipated it being. :D

Oh my god, you're not the only person to tell me this is one of my better writings and they want more. lol Hopefully, I can get hit over head with some inspiration and write another chapter. I would like to be able to do that. :D Thank you so much again!

[neolithicdream]

I love angry hurting Arizona and scared supportive Callie! Well done.

[majincammy]

Awesome, thank you so much! Took me a long time to get this out, so I'm super glad it's being so well received. <3

[neolithicdream]

Worth the wait! Writers block is a be-atch,isn't it? Especially when you have an idea or ongoing stuff but just can't manage to get it down on paper (or laptop as it were).