Fic-Bleach: A Historical Discourse of Several Moments And the Time After, Which Ended the Winter War

[maigaryu]

Title: A Historical Discourse of Several Moments And the Time After, Which Ended the Winter War
Fandom: Bleach
Rating: Pg-13 (minor swearing)
Word count: 4147
Summary: Sometimes when the dust settles, only the heros are dead.
Warnings: AU end of the so-called Winter War. Character death, no real spoliers except for one mention of Ichigo's mask.

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Comments

[oneangredwarf90]

this is AWESOME. I love how its like a report, or documentary style thing going on. Really well written. Love that Rukia kicked ASS.
-liz

[maigaryu]

Thanks! It was an experiment in style as much as material. I'm glad you liked it.

[loquaciousquark]

Holy crap, this was awesome. I love how this turned the whole manga on its head and how you took it to places I'd have never expected--the way you wrote Rukia's bankai and her mental break and the power she gained in return were just amazing. And omg omg omg, I absolutely adore the idea of the Dance, so much, I can't even. SO MUCH. <3 <3 <3 Memmed, and I can't wait to see more from you.

[maigaryu]

*glows with glee at praise*

Thank you very much. ^^ I'll admit I was worried about how believable the scenario was, and how it would be received. But the idea wouldn't leave me, and it kept insisting that if things fell just right...

Glad you liked it so much! :D

[concretexrain]

O_o If Kubo ever gets the chance to show Rukia's bankai and it is not this awesome time-stop thing that you've got going on, then I'm going to be very very very disappointed. This fic was ten shades of awesome and then some. ^^

[maigaryu]

Since he probably wont tell us, I just had to make one up. ^^ Not that it doesn't come without consequences... she can't use it without severe risk to herself.

Glad you liked it!

[afteriwake]

::is speechless::

Seriously. I've been reading fic for about 13 years in many different fandoms, and this is among the best I have ever read. Most certainly it's among the best in Bleach fic. I am highly impressed and wish I had even a fraction of your skill. ::bows down::

[maigaryu]

::is proud she made you speechless::

I'm very glad you enjoyed it. This is easily my favorite piece out of everything that I've "published," so I'm glad to see it well-received; even months after it was first published.

(pssst. You and sunlight_kisses below made me so gleeful that I'm posting the prologue for another bleach thing that's been puttering around on my desktop. Go check it out and tell me what you think! :D )

[sunlight_kisses]

Great fic, I love the format and objective narration. Rukia's bankai was very creative and a great choice. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think you may have made just one tiny grammatical error:

WHILE THE SOUND of Ichimarus body is audible,

I'm thinking it should be Ichimaru's body?

Anyways, nice work!

[maigaryu]

YOU FOUND A TYPO.

I love you.

Just for you and afteriwake, I've posted the prologue for one of my other Bleach endeavors. :D

Glad you enjoyed it!