Hazard

[magser]

Doctor Jeff Morgan left the cell and closed the door as quietly as he could, before turning a furious gaze on the two Officers before him.

“I’ve sedated him, he should be out of it for the rest of the night.”He glanced back into the cell where Jared lay almost comatose and Jeff took a visible deep breath in an effort to control emotions that were

Comments

[garvaldmains]

god i love being surprised...

Oh Chris babe *hugs him*

*hugs you* Dix

[magser]

I love surprising you!!
Love you sweetie!

[jennygeee]

Well done Chris - you're doing the right thing now and trying to put things right, now you have to persuade Jim of Jared's innocence.
xx

[magser]

He certainly has it cut out for him huh?
Thanks for being here again!

hey..

[siwikiwi]

JESUS!
This story keeps me on the edge of my seat every step of the way, and i love it.

Glad Chris is finally starting to see some sense *hugs him*
Now all he has to do is convince Jim to let Jared go,apologize to Jared, figure out somehow that Jen is alive so he and Jared can save him from whoever is holding him and kill the bastard... yeah I would get started if I were you Chris, cos you gotta a lot of work to do.

Thanx for sharing...

Lots of love <3

Re: hey..

[magser]

I'm so glad that its keeping you guessing! Thank you so much for the comments!
Hhehehehehe he has a bit of a job alright!

[shelgrainger2]

A brilliant chapter. I am so glad that Chris realises he is wrong and that he feels bad about what he did. It must hurt him to have never had his love returned but to hurt Jared like that out of jealousy was terrible. At least he can make up for it now. Poor Jared, I adore him and I am glad he has Jeff on his side too. Jim's feelings are understandable I guess. I can't wait to see Jensen's temper let loose on the guy who has him. Looking forward to more soon

[magser]

Wow thank you!
It hurt him something awful that Jensen couldnt return his feelings and that on top of what he now thinks is Jensens death has been to much , but he has it straight in his head now.....working on putting up the next one now.

[blackpanther07]

It's about damn time Chris got his head out of his ass and started acting like a cop rather than a scorned lover.
I really want to know what happened to Jared, what he remembered to make him break so completly.
I love this story of yours. Thank you for the amazing update. I can not wait for the next part.

[magser]

We are about to find out what happened to Jared...
Thank you for your lovely comment.... im blown away that anyone would bother!

[blackpanther07]

Of course we would 'bother' you are an amazing writer and you let us have the pleasure of reading your work.