Comments | magnus_leo: Harry Potter - "Four cigarettes in an ashtray" - Part 2 - Sirius/James/Lily/Remus

magnus_leo

Harry Potter - "Four cigarettes in an ashtray" - Part 2 - Sirius/James/Lily/Remus - NC-17

Aug 25, 2007 14:42

Title: Four cigarettes in an ashtray
Pairing: Sirius/James/Lily/Remus
Word Count: 18,337 words
Summary: Isolated from the war, tensions clash and mount, building and building; a storm in a teacup. Can four people exist in a single relationship?
Warnings: Swearing, violence, bloodplay, comeplay, betrayal, deceit, het, slash, foursome, alcohol use.
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harry potter, sirius/james/lily/remus, slash, het

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magnus_leo April 7 2008, 21:49:55 UTC

...Ahah, you are so right, recycling probably wouldn't be done at all. Wow. But yes, thanks so much :DDD

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magnus_leo April 7 2008, 21:50:36 UTC

Aw man, thanks so much, that's really flattering. Glad you liked :]

goodbyesheesha June 15 2008, 00:45:19 UTC

I just came across this today. Um, I'm stunned. HP is far from my usual fandom, and I generally only read it when there's nothing being posted in my main fandoms. Because of this, I don't tend to be as appreciative of HP fics; my standards are higher, I suppose. And this really was amazing. It is going to be my first HP fic added to memories. So, thank you.

magnus_leo June 18 2008, 16:48:54 UTC

Oh man, I love these types of feedback the most :D Thanks so much for the kind words, I'm really happy you liked it, especially if you don't read HP fic.

goodbyesheesha June 18 2008, 18:54:31 UTC

You like the shameless flattery best?

ms_worplesdon September 19 2008, 06:57:21 UTC

They kiss like Sirius is James, or Lily is Remus. They kiss like they haven't fought, ever, and that they're the perfect - the perfect everything. Adam and Eve, Virginia and Vita, Laura and Petrarch, Shakespeare and his fair youth, Endymion and his moon, Gertrude and Alice. They're all the sonnets and all the love, and they pull it like a rabbit out of a hat, just out of nowhere; James couldn't ever have imagined Sirius kiss someone that way, seeing him so open, so emptied of everything but scraps; just this boy and just those lips.

Holy...

Recklessness takes hold: "You know what? Sure.

That's my Sirius!

Marking her territory with heat-swollen lips and possessive hands under the water.

Dying.

"I can see your boobies,"

This is so awesome. How wonderful. God, I hope she doesn't start the tit meme. :(

"Elizabeth Taylor became a Jew to marry Eddie Fisher."

S'called dedication. She was such a sport.

"Yeah, Jamie," Sirius agrees. "The point is - would you become a Jew for me?"

Please. Who wouldn't? *flashes back to 8th grade*

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