Wow, this went in a totally different direction then I was expecting but I like it. And that ending was just so good and wrong and just sets everything up for another chapter. I will definitely be waiting patiently for the next update.
I'm glad you like it. There are more chapters, though not as many as I wished. ^^ More that I can't put up yet because they would leave questions too much.
You know, as much as I enjoy the whole fic concept, I can't help but think there are too many steps missing between part 2 and the massacre Optimus does with Megatron and Starscream
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Yes, I know I skipped a lot. And we -do- plan on going back. I just wanted to post some while I remembered, more or less. I'm not sure the Jettwins were mentioned, though, Op might have worked it out himself just there in the council... ^^; Still, I agree, there's a lot to add.
Jazz does survive; Skywarp got scared and warped him.And yes, I do feel sorry for G1 Shocks... Not only is it rape, the plug'n'play method is extremely painful for him. >< He does recover, or at least starts the process.
I have to admit, the skipping parts bothered me as well.
But apart from that your story is certainly taking a different route. And I honestly didn't think that THAT would happen to Shockwave. I would have expected him to join the winning side and be done with it. Just because it would be the logical thing to do. But your version... Now that's new. Poor Shocky.
Yeah, the skipping parts was the reason I hesitated so long to put it up at all. >.<
I'm glad we managed to get a different route. And in part, I don't think Shocks was even given the chance to change sides. AniMegs is more than a little off. I honestly do feel sorry for him.
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I'm not sure the Jettwins were mentioned, though, Op might have worked it out himself just there in the council... ^^; Still, I agree, there's a lot to add.
Jazz does survive; Skywarp got scared and warped him.And yes, I do feel sorry for G1 Shocks... Not only is it rape, the plug'n'play method is extremely painful for him. >< He does recover, or at least starts the process.
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But apart from that your story is certainly taking a different route.
And I honestly didn't think that THAT would happen to Shockwave. I would have expected him to join the winning side and be done with it. Just because it would be the logical thing to do.
But your version...
Now that's new.
Poor Shocky.
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I'm glad we managed to get a different route. And in part, I don't think Shocks was even given the chance to change sides. AniMegs is more than a little off.
I honestly do feel sorry for him.
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