Comments | magni_zeal: Sunstorm Bluestreak 11

magni_zeal

Sunstorm Bluestreak 11

Nov 28, 2010 13:38

This is an alternate universe of lily-vendrem and xobit-prime's Greek-verse, co-written with Xobit. However, it IS NOT in the actual Greek-verse, or at least it's not in that continuity. It is also STICKY.

( The End )

character: bluestreak, character: sunstorm, augreek

Comments 10

I'm loving it! dendey November 28 2010, 20:03:36 UTC

I gotta say bro, I still love this RP the two of ya did.
Very, very much love it and mourn that it has come to an end, but as it is said: 'All things must come to an end.' and 'The Best die young.'
Need I say more? Yes I still wanna know the rest of Sunstorms trine, how many sparklings they will have and by which name they will fly, but hey, if they want their privacy now...I am certain I can poke again in a few years to eventually receive a positive response like: the muse has returned! >:)

Re: I'm loving it! magni_zeal November 29 2010, 02:20:22 UTC

Hehe. I know you want more... Hell, I kind of what more, but, muses.

yukiko_angel November 29 2010, 02:15:25 UTC

loved it, it was interesting how they interacted an the difference between their culture.

Epilogue?

magni_zeal November 29 2010, 02:19:28 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. It was fun playing with the cultures.

And wow, I still saw your first comment... I wondered what was up with that. This one came out, though. ^^

There's not going to be an epilogue, sorry. It kind of took me by surprise when it ended too. They just both went, "okay. That's enough looking at our life."

yukiko_angel November 29 2010, 12:46:32 UTC

had some problem with my keyboard ...

awwww, but we just want to know if everything went well!

magni_zeal November 29 2010, 20:14:09 UTC

aah, keyboard. Nasty.

Everything went well. That's sadly all I can get. >

anavidbookworm February 22 2011, 14:44:45 UTC

This is a pairing that I honestly never thought about but it works. The influence of their separate cultures was so interesting to watch. You also did an excellent job with the growing to love concept. Love at first site is nice to have but does not always happen. This was a great example of love overcoming and growing along with the characters. I believe a stronger and deeper relationship was the result.

magni_zeal February 22 2011, 20:35:57 UTC

I wanted to play Sunstorm, and then my mental Sun' just started drooling at innocent Blue'. I'm also fond of Blue, so that helped. The culture clash was a lot of fun, and I agree, they'll be much stronger than others who have an easy time of it.

d_lueth October 12 2011, 18:49:34 UTC

*nom nom nom nom*

I think I have a new favorite pairing :D Your writing style took a bit to get use to, but the story sucked me in and wouldn't let me leave! Bluestreak is so adorable, and Sunstorm is trying so hard :) Once they finally admit their love for each other I doubt they'll be coming out of that berthroom for a long time. |3

*hides in corner to reread*

magni_zeal October 12 2011, 21:23:09 UTC

Oooh, yeah. Not coming out of the berth for a LOOOOONG time. ^^ The odd writing style is probably an artifact of the RP format, no matter how we try to make it flow and read more or less like a novel. I do agree it's a lovely pairing... We had a LOT of fun with them, even if it didn't become GreekVerse Cannon. ^^

*puts a blind up to hide you* There you go!