You don't want to start it, You don't want to end

Mar 01, 2009 12:46

“Hey, what’s a mocha?”

Hinata Hyuuga, in the midst of arranging the stack of gift cards, jumped and looked up. The man standing in front of her - he was what Ino would call lickable, considering how nice his biceps were when he scratched the back of his head - was looking at the menu above her head with a concerned look on his face.

“I-I’m sorry ( Read more... )

style: drabble, rant, genre: alternate universe, fandom: naruto, hall: senior year, pairing: naruto/hinata, the shivs, fiction: fan

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perpetual159 March 1 2009, 19:16:49 UTC
lulz....

Poor Hina-chan! I thought you got over your stutter!

Still, Hinata, you're a total babe, and you'd definitely make a hot, "lickable" ghost if you died! But... as much as I'd love to see what kind of ghost you'd turn out to be--I bet a stalking ghost personality would suit you, since practice makes perfect--I'm not in a rush to find out, so YOU BETTER BE ALIVE AFTER THIS WHOLE SHIT IS OVER!

Very cute story! ^_^ Me loved it long time! Five dolla'!

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magneticwave March 2 2009, 00:07:57 UTC
Now I want to go and find Stalking Ghost!Hinata stories. Except they BETTER BE AU. Because she is alive. Yessir. No denial here.

Thank you!

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perpetual159 March 2 2009, 23:14:43 UTC
Hahaha! Yes, indeed! They better be AU!

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fatal_red March 1 2009, 22:12:57 UTC
Haha, I love this. ♥

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magneticwave March 2 2009, 00:08:10 UTC
Thank you!

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vicucha_sc March 3 2009, 00:44:37 UTC
LOL AWESOME!!!♥

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magneticwave March 3 2009, 01:19:15 UTC
Thanks!

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era_chan March 4 2009, 07:21:17 UTC
This is soooooooooo sweet! I love her reaction and Naruto being the dense guy that he is, has made Hinata faint. Just hilarious!

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magneticwave March 4 2009, 11:01:57 UTC
Thank you, ha!

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mabru_black March 5 2009, 02:42:34 UTC
Short, but sweet and your writing is very good.
Loved it!!! Damn, I would faint too lol

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magneticwave March 5 2009, 12:21:40 UTC
Thank you!

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