Drabble: Sex

[magnetic_pole]

Sex
Severus, Avery, Lily, Lucius, others
Not explicit, 200 words

Comments

[magnetic_pole]

Thanks! I felt like a bit of tease, here, but surely some people like theorizing about sex, rather than reading about it directly? M.

[secretsolitaire]

Well, I like this S! ;-)

Severus was always fair; every favor was returned in kind, every slight remembered and repaid.

*nods* Seems very Snape to me. And it's interesting that he makes the connection between sex and dark magic, both a key part of his development as he hits puberty...

[magnetic_pole]

They're both mysterious and addictive, aren't they? Thanks for reading! M.

[cordelia_v]

These sentences are so well-crafted that they're works of art. And the series is brilliant, schemingreader is right.

Oh, Severus. A life that's trained him to think of emotions and relationships like a CPA treats his accounts. Poor woobie.

[magnetic_pole]

Glad you're enjoying! I'm having fun with these--they're like short prose poems. Thanks for reading. M.

[kellychambliss]

I love the whole "fairness" trope, especially presented as it is in such careful parallel constructions (the quid pro quo of grammar as well as favors/slights /g/). And of course all the control, that order that Severus so clearly appreciates, is itself perfectly balanced by its opposite -- the addictive wildness, the thrill of chaos and lack of control. So well-done.

[magnetic_pole]

Ah, Kelly. This comment rivals my drabble in cleverness as well as length. I love my brilliant flisters. Thanks for reading! M.

[mindabbles]

Ah, the reciprocity again. I love the connections between sex, and fun, and dark magic, and power. Very intense and well crafted.

[magnetic_pole]

Thanks, M! M.