Comments | magnavox_23: Fic: "T Is For Temporal, Being" Gen, Rated PG

magnavox_23

Fic: "T Is For Temporal, Being" Gen, Rated PG

Mar 02, 2015 16:46

Title: "T Is For Temporal, Being"
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wallpaper, fan fiction, stargate

Comments 4

ninja007 March 3 2015, 06:43:39 UTC

Wow! Very poignant and just strong. Well written and took my breath away.

magnavox_23 March 4 2015, 10:54:51 UTC

Such kind words, and please breathe!

sg_fignewton March 19 2015, 13:06:13 UTC

Oh, wow. And oh, ow!

Your Jack is so perfectly in character. I love the back-and-forth between him and Daniel. And I'm so glad that every one of them were determined to give SG-10 their long delayed peace.

What about Cromwell, though? Was he there, too?

I love how the team didn't-quote-lie to George, and he saw through them immediately, and he's wise enough to let it slide. :)

One tiny nitpick:

“Therein lies the difference between you and I.”

Jack, the official Grammar Pedant of SG-1, would never make that mistake! ;)

Thanks so much for writing a great contribution to the Soup.

stargatesg1971 April 23 2015, 18:14:25 UTC

Wow, what a clever and poignant story. You totally blew me away. Thanks for sharing!