Ringing In The New Year Comment Ficathon

[magisterequitum]

Welcome to the Last Comment Ficathon of the Year!

Well, it's the last day of 2k14, so why not go out with a bang and have a comment ficathon. Or get an early jump and start of 2k15 with the right priorities, and that's fic.

Comments

[lynzie914]

tvd, caroline/enzo (caroline+enzo)

There’s no story here.
I let you flirt with me
because I’m lonely.

[kwritten]

I'm sorry in advance.

She says with a smile and he knows that she's ninety percent bravado and ten percent lipgloss but he lets her kiss him because she wants him to and he knows she wants him to and that's enough.

I won't apologize.

She says and her shoes are in her hand standing in the doorway of his tiny apartment and her eyeliner is already smudged under her eyes which means he can't bring her to tears begging with his tongue because she's already there for the wrong reasons and it won't mean the same thing but he opens the door wider and doesn't stop her from walking in.

I shouldn't.

She says and she's playing more drunk than she is and it gives them both the cover she needs to linger into his outstretched arms when she pretends to stumble and he grabs her elbow because he wants to be that guy that takes her home and drapes the sheet over her and watches her sleep and makes omelettes in the morning but he's the guy that's going to kiss her when he shouldn't and that's what she wants so he does and she sighs

[lynzie914]

I so didn't expect this to be filled, so I was super happy when I saw that you did.

I love that she's using him and not using him at the same time. That there's some weird middle ground that cancels out both. She's lonely so she goes to him, she stays because, he looks at her differently than anyone else (right now) and that makes her feel less alone. And I love how she shows up with differnet words on her lips each time, but somehow they all mean the same thing.

And this:

But she's just a girl who is ninety percent bravado and ten percent lipgloss who never learned to fight dirty or guard her heart.

Its like the defenition of Caroline Forbes and hurts so wonderfully good and its so perfect and horrible and you write so well.

I love this! Thank you for filling it for me!

[kwritten]

(I honestly respect Enzo this season because he's literally the only person who genuinely cares about what is happening with Caroline.) (I really over-identified with him killing a random girl because she was crying. Like: WORD ENZO THAT IS HOW I FEEL ABOUT CAROLINE CRYING, TOO.) (There's something wrong with me.)

Thanks for the prompt!

So glad you liked it!!!