fic: half the seeds (tvd; elena, ensemble)

Mar 26, 2013 15:55

title: half the seeds
character: elena; ensemble
rating: r
summary: she doesn't need someone to tell her to turn it off. her mind does that all on its own, because see, the mind can only take so much.
author's note: au for 4.15 because really, elena could have easily done this on her own with having her agency taken from her. for confetti_storm. also for the ( Read more... )

character: elena gilbert, fic, tv: the vampire diaries

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confetti_storm March 26 2013, 20:31:31 UTC
FIRST OFF, I LOVE HOW YOU CONSTRUCTED THIS. and the pov changes work so well. i know you were worried about that but it was done brilliantly and the fic is more effective for it. i feel like i have to reread it a few times before i can appreciate all of the little things. i adore everything, from pre-accident!elena, to her blowing smoke all over stefan's face♥ to snapping damon's neck to teaming up with bonnie because it makes so much sense that they've both had enough and would burn everything down, if not for plec not letting them. and the description of caroline and elena's friendship was spot on, too.

Once you wanted to be this girl forever. To be with her. To be her. You had life planned out. College with the girlfriends, marriage to the boy, job with the writing detail and pen name, carrying on that Gilbert line, and Sunday dinners every other week with the parents and brother ( ... )

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magisterequitum March 28 2013, 19:39:01 UTC
I'M SO HAPPY IT WAS EVERYTHING YOU WANTED. and that the shifting pov worked.

WE CAN JUST LIVE IN THIS FIC, IT'S BETTER HERE. ♥

thank you so much, love

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magisterequitum March 28 2013, 19:39:27 UTC
We can live in fic. It's all better here anyway!

Thank you so much. :)

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