Prompt: When You're Desperate

[magikcatfics]

Title: When You're Desperate
Rating: PG
Spoilers/Warning: Snogging, mostly
Word Count: 1,281
Prompt: R/Hr with something funny involving George - for nakimura 
A/N: Usually I avoid writing any of the twins, but this was a lot of fun! Hope you enjoy it Nakimura!

Comments

[liebedance]

Oh, this was cute :) I really liked it. A lot.

I don't think the comparison to a broom really helped, though. It kind of pulled me out of the moment.

Snog-and-duck powder. Tehe. Again, that was a really clever idea. But it kinda seemed forced a bit. I don't know.

Loved Ron staring at Hermione. Good details and descriptions. Me gusta mucho.

[magikcatfics]

Thank you. And thank you for the constructive criticism. :)

[mollywheezy]

Snog and Duck powder is brilliant! ROTFL I really enjoyed this story. I think I especially liked George and his reactions to Ron. Great job!! :D

[magikcatfics]

Hehe...first time writing George--it was fun! Thanks for the review!

[honourweasley12]

Ha! This was great, I really enjoyed it.

[magikcatfics]

Thanks!