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chickyoops July 10 2009, 17:06:12 UTC
Beautiful story. ♥

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magicletters July 10 2009, 20:41:54 UTC
Thank you!

Oh and also? I love your icon ^_^

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chell1 July 10 2009, 17:34:08 UTC
Your story is so so cute!!

I loved it the first time I read it and I love it now with the added shmoopy epilogue!!

It made me really happy that both had to go through a rough phase before finding their way towards each other again. ^^

And, of course, Jensen was amazing. Simultaneously fierce and vulnerable.

Kisses!!

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magicletters July 10 2009, 20:44:58 UTC
Aw thank you ma'am! The ending was probably the most challenging thing to write - I changed it soooo much!! But, I figured since the rest was so angsty, I should end on a happy note :D

And I can't wait until yours is up and posted. I wanna know how it ends!

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soledadseraph July 10 2009, 17:50:03 UTC
*squeeee*

This was amazing! Absolutely amazing!

I don't think there are a lot of fics about Jensen and Mackenzie's relationship, and you made it work so well here...it was heartbreaking <3

I loved your Chris! And all your OCs were excellent =)

And God, did this line take me back; There's a small playground with a few swings, some monkey bars and a slide, and he watches Mackenzie run around with the other younger kids, the wind catching her hair and causing the her sweater to blow back behind her.

I loved it ^_^

*runs off to rec*

*hugs*

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magicletters July 10 2009, 21:51:32 UTC
Thank you! I'm sooo glad I didn't disappoint :) And thanks for the rec! I'm sure I'll be pimping your story like crazy come August!

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chrissy6299 July 10 2009, 17:56:04 UTC
Great story, I enjoyed it a lot!
Thanks for sharing.

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magicletters July 10 2009, 21:52:42 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it :D

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embroiderama July 10 2009, 18:11:07 UTC
Aw, lovely story! It makes me want to go "OH BOYS" and hug them.

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magicletters July 10 2009, 22:27:12 UTC
Thank you! I did kinda put them through a lot, but hopefully the happy ending made up for it a little :P

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