Fic: The Arrangement [SG-1; Explicit]

[magickmoons]

Title: The Arrangement
Word Count: 1130
Rating: Explicit
Original/Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Jack
Warnings:
Summary: They didn't have a relationship; they had an arrangement. But things change
Notes: 1. written for a writerverse challenge - prompts: traditions, time for a change
2. My read on canon Sam & Jack is that they just wouldn't behave

Comments

[lady_invidia]

Guh... very sexy...

I'm hopeless at writing smut so I'm constantly jealous of those who can, not that this is JUST smut - you definitely painted the full backstory of not being able to have what you want.

I think the idea that they had this 'arrangement' might be my new head canon for them =D

Only thing I didn't like was your choice of the word 'pussy', but that's just personal preference.

[magickmoons]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it (mostly!). I'm glad the whole story came through; when I write something like this, I'm never sure where the emphasis will really be in the final product. There was actually even a whole section that I ended up not putting in on how the whole thing began. I was worried that by leaving that out, I moved the emphasis to the sex, rather than the emotional back and forth.

Word choice is always difficult because no matter what you pick (especially for women), there's going to be someone who isn't crazy about it, unfortunately. I try to limit my use of the more 'hot-button' terms, but sometimes I just feel like a workaround won't quite cut it.

Thanks again :)