Ficlet: Cleansing Rain [Firefly]

[magickmoons]

Title: Cleansing Rain
Prompt: caught in the rain
Word Count: 177
Rating: T
Original/Fandom: Firefly
Pairings (if any): none
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/RPF etc): none
Summary: A rainstorm near the Companion Training House
Notes: written for weekly challenge at writerverse
Set between the series and the movie

Comments

[meridian_rose]

This is amazing. Such rich descriptions from the cold, fat, raindrops to the scarlet puddle of her dress.

Also in character, weeping alone in the rain, and her quiet dignity as she simply slips her cloak over her naked body to walk back to the house.

I cannot find a single thing to give concrit about. Wonderful piece.

[magickmoons]

Thank you! I was really nervous about this one. It feels different to me than my usual style.

[ami_ven]

Very nice! Your descriptions are absolutely beautiful.

[magickmoons]

Thanks!