HALLELUJAH!

[magicdragonomg]

The hectic portion of my life is gone! Winter sports season is over! I have no sports (well, except select once a week and the occasional tournament) during spring! After school...after school I GO HOME instead of heading to the gym or the study hall room to spend another four hours on campus

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[gemkazoni]

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First of all, LIKE HELL YOU CAN'T WRITE ROMANCE. THIS IS FABULOUS AND I'VE ALREADY READ IT THROUGH, LIKE, THREE TIMES BECAUSE I JUST CANNOT DEAL WITH ALL THE AWESOME. YOU MUST STOP SELLING YOURSELF SHORT BECAUSE YOU ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER AND I MEAN IT. <33333

Just! WHERE DO I BEGIN. Fakir makes me wibble at the beginning! ;___; And gosh, his nightmare made me shiver. It was so cold and terrifying and the parallels you drew to his mother and to the final battle were just incredible, and~! Gosh, I just wanted to hug that poor boy. But on a rather serious note, I really enjoyed how you discussed all the repercussions and consequences of trying to write Ahiru back into a girl. I think a lot of writers try to gloss over that aspect and get right to the happy, but I think it's important to show all the danger of it. It was definitely very in-character for Fakir to consider all those "solutions" in extreme detail before attempting it. BUT THEN IT WORKED AND I SQUEED BECAUSE IN THE

[magicdragonomg]

UM, I wasn't going to post it to the PT comm, but after reading that very, very self-respect increasing essay (;D), I JUST MIGHT WILL. <3

OMG, I'm so glad you liked it! * u * Jeez, I must really have issues, because when I posted this I thought, "Well, this will be okay. People will read and think it's just okay. Chloe will read and think it's just okay." BUT I WAS WRONG AND PLEASANTLY SURPRISED TO FIND A RESPONSE FILLED WITH SQUEEING AND CAPSLOCK~ <333333333

No, srsly. I am so happy right now. This lifted my esteem so much. 8D

AND I WAS SO WORRIED ABOUT WRITING FAKIR IN-CHARACTER I THOUGHT MAYBE I DIDN'T. :c BUT THEN YOU SAY HE'S VERY IN-CHARACTER AND OF COURSE I BELIEVE YOU AND NOW I AM BOTH RELIEVED AND ECSTATIC. <3333333333

THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR YOUR RESPONSE. I am so very flattered. >////< I'm going to keep your comment in mind whenever I get discouraged writing. 8D

[catalina_bella]

Only Ahiru could manage to be adorable while drunk XD
Very nice, I like how Fakir thinks everything will turn out horribly, it's definitely an uncertainty he could have.

[magicdragonomg]

Lol, yes, only Ahiru. xDD <3

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. c: -nod nod-

[catalina_bella]

Ha, we have the same taste in icons!

[elegy_19]

So very cute, sweet, squeeful, etc, etc.

Try to deny your feelings all you want, Fakir. You don't fool anyone.

And Ahiru drunk needs to be seen more of.

[magicdragonomg]

Oh yes, I agree! Who knows, maybe I'll put Ahiru into more of a drunken state in future fics. <3

I glad you found it cute! I certainly thought it was while writing it. cx