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The Love Below - Chapter Thirteen

Jul 24, 2009 13:13

Title: The Love Below
Characters: L/Mello/Near; this chapter is Mello-centric
Rating: M
Word Count: ~4,000
Spoilers: For now, Mello and Near's real names. Possibly others along the way.
Summary: Mello and Near are competing for L's title. Are they also competing for his love?

( Chapter Thirteen - Immaculate Conception )

Comments 13

mizzshy July 24 2009, 17:49:56 UTC

>insert indescribable noises here<

I can't even think of how to describe my thoughts but yeeeeeee I'm even more excited to see future chapters! x3

magic_mind July 24 2009, 18:22:37 UTC

Yay! I love when readers find it hard to describe their thoughts. I like to think that means the chapter was a success. :)

As a side note, I'm finding it difficult to tear my eyes away from your icon. *drools*

Thanks so much for commenting, and new chapters are on the way. :)

mizzshy July 25 2009, 18:46:51 UTC

Hehe, you'd be right in this instance. :D

Thank you - I have no idea where it's from. ^^;

I can't wait. :D

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magic_mind July 25 2009, 02:01:02 UTC

*joins you in the huggles* These three really are in need of it, with all I put them through. XD

Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm so glad you're enjoying this little fic. :)

elisabell_angel July 25 2009, 01:08:42 UTC

I KNEW IT! ^_^

*clings* Much love from this nerd who believes you did this chapter flawlessly. Also, good addition of the T.S. Elliot quote.

magic_mind July 25 2009, 02:02:24 UTC

You knew it! Huzzah! I'm so glad this didn't seem like it was coming out of left field. :)

*blushes* Thank you thank you thank you!

elisabell_angel July 25 2009, 20:39:14 UTC

I thought I'd dissapoint you by knowing? XD

magic_mind July 26 2009, 19:33:09 UTC

Haha, oh no. I didn't want to this seem completely uncalled for or out of place. So it's good that you could tell it was going to happen. :)

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magic_mind July 25 2009, 15:09:55 UTC

Thank you so much! This means a lot coming from you, I really love your fics as well. :)

joyinthedance July 26 2009, 17:50:14 UTC

*DIES OF LOVE*

My god, L made the best decision ever. And Mello's reaction -- that it's the best AND the worst possible thing -- breaks my heart. And how it's still so obvious they're STILL going to be competing...mmmm. The kissing is hot. I can't wait for more of this.

magic_mind July 26 2009, 19:38:13 UTC

*revives you*

Haha, I like to think he made a good choice as well. XD And yes, Mello and Near are both feeling quite conflicted at the moment. Their competition will reach new levels, I'm sure. :)

*blushes* I'm glad you thought the kissing was hot. Hopefully the hotness will only increase as we go on. :)

Thank you!