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maggie_danger

Say What You Mean, Chapter 6: Music Room #3

Jun 28, 2010 01:06

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Chapter 6: Music Room #3

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…Kyouya.

Kyouya.

Kyouya?

Kyouya knew he was waking up. But it was slow, like languid swimming toward a surface that he didn't want to reach. He felt the fog of his dreams fade away around him. Sensation tingled in his fingers.

A part of him didn't want to wake up. It clutched to sleep, wishing the world ( Read more... )

bl/yaoi, ouran, fanfic

Comments 7

o_0 sylviamoody June 28 2010, 20:07:04 UTC

Haha... I hope you don't mind... I have been lurking for a while now, watching this fic, and I just had to tell you how happy I was with this ending :D It was well worth the wait...
This is quite possibly the best Ouran fic I've ever read... All of the characters are SO SO SO in character, I love your portrayal of the Ootori family... In fact, I feel a fangirl squee coming on. Thankyou so much for writing this. <3

Re: o_0 maggie_danger June 28 2010, 20:16:50 UTC

Aw. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading, and I hope my future stuff continues to entertain you.

mightymaeve June 29 2010, 10:47:24 UTC

PFFFT! "Yeah! I can feel bulky muscles messing up my slender arms as we speak." I love the ending, not only for its humour, but for the realistic way you delivered Kyouya's change; it wasn't anything miraculous, but it was small and hugely significant in its breakthrough to his ragged, desperately broken and protected heart...

"Half of him wanted to scream-and the other half wanted to kill that half." I love that sentence; it describes Kyouya's war within so well!

The piano parallel symbolism with their relationship were so beautiful!

sanni_tri_angle June 30 2010, 01:42:49 UTC

Ahh, I've been reading this since chapter 4 and waiting patiently since chapter 5. And the wait was well worth it, as you wrapped this story up beautifully. Bravo!

just wanted to send some congrats here too ceile_chan June 30 2010, 14:03:19 UTC

Just in case you don't get a chance to check out the review I left for you on FFnet, I wanted to personally congratulate you on finishing this wonderful story. It was really enjoyable to read, and you are one of the very few writers in that fandom that I really appreciate. I'm sure it's b/c Ouran tends to attract a certain demographic that the fanfic is full of MarySues and plot re-tellings and surface-only takes on the characters. Because of these reasons, I rarely read Ouranfic even though I love OHSHC a lot. Your story is a refreshing and complex look at this pairing, and I much enjoyed. Kudos!
I hope that you will re-visit this fandom again. If you do, I will certainly look forward to your work. Thank you for sharing!
~C-chan

sodiumbisulfite July 16 2010, 23:27:41 UTC

I loved this. Probably the best Ouran fic I've read. I would love to see more from you at some point :D