Comments | maggie_122222: Endlessly -4-

maggie_122222

Endlessly -4-

Apr 08, 2007 11:08

I woke up earlier than usual the next morning in order to help him pack. I was trying to drown my guilt with the last act of kindness. And then he would be gone. Forever.The severity and range of the word made me stop. I hadn't wanted him in my life, but I wasn't able to accept the fact that I would never see him again. I didn't like to think I'd ( Read more... )

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thecaffeinebean April 8 2007, 20:09:13 UTC

Brilliant, hearbreaking. :o I hope more will come soon, I'm addicted!

maggie_122222 April 8 2007, 20:13:57 UTC

Yay! One addict! :D

wayfaringmuser April 8 2007, 20:09:51 UTC

Matt - "I wanna have sex on the beach!!" haha. Sorry I couldn't resist...And aww what a cute chapter! Good luck with the next one!! xx

maggie_122222 April 8 2007, 20:13:26 UTC

Hahaha, that is basically it! Well, he would've gone for the sidewalk, but Dom wouldn't go for it =P

numberoneuno April 8 2007, 21:27:44 UTC

Ironic because Matt said in an interview that Dom always does it in public!
Perfect chapter - as usual. :(
I thank You.
x

maggie_122222 April 8 2007, 21:41:35 UTC

Hahahaha!!!! See, I didn't know that. But then again, they aren't themselves :D

I will, however, keep this in mind next time I'm writing the other story.

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shellstep April 9 2007, 02:28:13 UTC

I baked you a cake before I left, because I know how much you like my cakes and I couldn't think of anything else about me you liked.
This line is both so sweet and sad at the same time. I think I'm in love with your Matthew lmao.

There, she flew high into the wind and fell into the sea. I ran after her; I wanted to see her floating, in peace, as she died slowly.
This is such a beautiful image, you have such a way with words.

And the end, I really like it too, the suspense. This story just gets better and better. You're like a breath of fresh air haha.

maggie_122222 April 9 2007, 04:16:19 UTC

Aww, thanks :D. That really makes me feel better after writing three chapters to the story.

And I admit I'm falling for my version of Matt too.

j33_3 April 9 2007, 13:04:14 UTC

"Does it, really?"

ehh??? Now you need to post more! you can't let me hang on like this!!

maggie_122222 April 9 2007, 13:52:18 UTC

Hehehe. Tuesday after the concert. . .

The next chapter hangs too, I think :D

pluginbaby16 April 10 2007, 02:58:55 UTC

Youre going to the l.a concert? Lucky. I was suppose to go to the san fran one tonight but my mom wouldnt let me. xD

Ahh i love this story.

maggie_122222 April 10 2007, 04:44:53 UTC

WHAT?! Aww, that really sucks :( *sigh* I would be completely devestated in your place.

:-D

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