Fic: Silence isn't golden

[magenta_fic]

Title: Silence isn't golden
Pairing: Adam/Tommy
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~1500
Summary: Tommy's usually pretty quiet, but sometimes he's really, really not.
Notes: Written for justina_29 for the charity:water drive. Sorry this took so long! Her prompt was "kinky, forceful, dirty talk" and well...it got a little schmoopy at the end, because that's what I do

Comments

[rae_1985]

Damn girl, great work as always. This Tommy is so loud and mouthy, I liked it. :D

[i_bleed_magenta]

I love my Tommy loud and mouthy :D Glad you liked it bb!

[huntersprey]

That was hot! Loved the little bit of shmoop, too. :D

[i_bleed_magenta]

thanks!

[x0christie0x]

Oh this was awesome. A dirty talking Tommy is my favorite Tommy. ;) haha Definitely hot and I loved the sweetness at the end. ♥

[i_bleed_magenta]

dirty talking tommy is my favourite too! glad you liked it!

[zoodlemouse13]

So awesome. I love this type of fic...hot & sexy but full of love. You wrote so beautifully I could feel the love & trust.

I really liked this --> "and Tommy knew he had him. Anyone else might look at them, Tommy tied to the bed, held down by Adam’s big hands and think that Adam was running the show, but that wasn’t really right." That one little bit made the dynamic clear. Tommy isn't subservient. It's a healthy D/s thing going on. Loved that.

And the schmoop. That's my favourite. Adam holding him and whispering in his ear ... so gorgeous.

I just loved this whole thing. :)

[i_bleed_magenta]

thank you! i'm glad you liked it so much, i can't help but make everything lovey-dovey :P

[zoodlemouse13]

Re-read it.

I forgot this --> "And one of Adam’s biggest buttons, one that practically flashed red begging to be pushed was knowing that Tommy loved everything he did to him, that he made Tommy happy."

Awesome. Adam loving to make Tommy happy. Just made my heart warm.

Hope this won't offend you but there was one little typo that you might want to fix --> weird, possessive, but not that’s exactly what he loved about it.

should it say "now"? Sorry, I just can't help it. Stuff like that leaps out at me. Hope you don't mind.

[i_bleed_magenta]

ah, boo, it slipped past me and my beta! thanks for pointing it out!