Transient

[magazhchi]

She ran in the meadows with outstretched arms, looking up in the sky. A fleet of birds passed over the clear blue ocean, which reflected in her eyes. Euphoria swept her unruly curls back and she breezed past the strong wind aiming for the horizon. Her heartbeat matched her excitement

Comments

[roina_arwen]

Nifty take on the topic!

(FYI, your link got posted twice in the topic thread)

[magazhchi]

Thank you.*smiles*

(I think somebody corrected it before I could, thanks for letting me know about it.)

[rayaso]

Very creative approach! Your language was almost poetic in parts.

[magazhchi]

Thank you.*smiles* Happy to know that you found it poetic.

[bleodswean]

A sad ending and perhaps an inevitable truth to the Trolley Problem. Rich, emotive detail adds so much to this piece.

[magazhchi]

That's how the prompt spoke to me. Thank you*smiles* Happy to know the efforts came across.

[my_name_is_jenn]

So heartbreaking. I love your take on this prompt.

[magazhchi]

It is. Thank you for letting me know your appreciation *smiles*

[baxaphobia]

A scary dream indeed!

[magazhchi]

True. That's how it flowed. Thank you for commenting *smiles*